Skat A Poet Free verse

Ordinary Man

The Ordinary Man

In the kitchen where I feed, greed for you, my only need
Across the table, longing to be swept by your eyes
Like the average guy you speak of  long days
Tired and weary, not handy in bed 

Flames burned out the desire in hopes one day to return
I open the window, in hopes you feel and follow the tease
These feelings are so frustrating
I compare beyond mountains so boring

I hold back, missing your million kisses to none
Making wishes, I can't breath in my dream
A love connection ending like death
Your sex drive- gone cold, my wild sexuality ends in tears

The rage- The power - The hunger- Needs to be fed
No matter, tonight I'm setting the vibrator on high
One thing I won't deny myself, the pleasure my body needs 
Who needs the ordinary man, when I have a box full of batteries and toys!

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White Wolf October 4, 2016 at 9:10 PM Bold and funny I might add, Ordinary men like myself are so jealous of those toys... Haha... You have a long list of poetry gonna take a while to work through it by the looks.../|\

Neil Kruger October 13, 2015 at 12:35 PM SKAT A. If a man cannot see what he has in a woman then he needs to take a hike.

Richard Lamoureux June 2, 2015 at 7:08 AM You have a unique way of expressing yourself, I enjoy it.

Elmer Candol August 1, 2014 at 1:45 AM Nice poem.. I like the story of the poem.. It makes me an ordinary man when I read..

Robin Davis March 19, 2014 at 9:04 AM SKAT Its sad when a love starts to fade away, But you showed him he can be replaced and not needed. < blushing at the end part > LOL Thanks for the wonderful comment on my Fallen Hero poem.

Justin Bordner February 17, 2014 at 3:25 PM Glad I'm no ordinary man, compared to my touch and groove a machine would just deepen the desire For the ravaging man that I am. A most motivating write. J.A.B.

Dustin Riddle January 30, 2014 at 11:28 PM This is a good poem! A man out done by a machine! Keep up the good work. -D -

Daryl Gaines January 15, 2014 at 12:08 PM Skat This is great work of a poem. And thank you for reaching out to me and for your supportive comments. Right now this is the only way I could figure out how to reach you because I could not find a way to directly respond to your comment. As you know I'm a new member and still trying to learn how to use the site. Thank you for taking the time to read my work though. Great job with this writing I really enjoyed it

Fatima Nusairat December 7, 2013 at 8:06 PM Very nice and interesting work my friend.Congratulations to you, Skat.

Len Gasun December 4, 2013 at 12:56 AM Hi, my dearest sis & friend Skat! Stopping by here for a while to extend my biggest heartfelt congratulations on your awesome win in the contest. Big big hearty congratulations my dearest Skat! Biggest hugs! I love and enjoyed reading this stellar write of urs this pm. This is a brilliant & unique idea for the contest. Thanks for sharing! Missing again to stop by on your poetry page & my honor. Hope u & ur family is doin fine always! I'll be back to congrats the others;)) Big hugs! lovm4evrLeo

Abdulhafeez Oyewole December 3, 2013 at 8:00 PM Awesome write! Congratulations to you, Skat. Thanks for your inspiring visits. Good night.

Richard Lamoureux December 3, 2013 at 7:17 PM Congrats SKAT, a rather brave piece. You wrote it with a sense of humor. Congratulations.

Roger Horsch December 3, 2013 at 7:10 PM A very intense poem Skat, Nice win. I enjoyed reading it....Hugs...Roger

Andrea Dietrich December 3, 2013 at 5:59 PM ooh la la. GREAT twist at the end. congrats .

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl December 3, 2013 at 1:35 PM Nice one Skat many congratulations xx

Bl Devnath October 26, 2013 at 11:03 AM Very deep observation it's. Nicely expressed the feeling of boring. Loved always, bl

Kelly Deschler October 9, 2013 at 9:50 PM I know exactly how you felt when you wrote this. When I am bored, I write about what I don't have, or what I wish I could be doing. I really liked this poem, and I did not get bored while reading it! Terrific work, SKAT!...Thanks for all of the nice comments.They are very much appreciated, my friend! :)

Jacob Reinhardt September 4, 2013 at 8:59 AM Hi Skat! Thanks for commenting on my poem it's nice to meet you! I really like this poem! The way you use those short single word lines is very powerful. And how lucky you are to be so deeply in love! That makes two of us :) Anyways nice to meet you poet friend!

Richard Lamoureux July 12, 2013 at 3:15 PM It's tough when the one we love seems distant. Hope it all worked out in the end.

Shiraz Iqbal June 23, 2013 at 1:01 PM I can feel from your words what absence lead to....... Beautiful

Dchante Mckenzie April 19, 2013 at 12:41 PM This is sooo good! I've been reading a few of your poems and I LOVE your work! Keep it up! ^_^ ~Chante <3

Thvia Shetley October 6, 2010 at 8:47 AM I totally get this... and am living it at the moment. My love and I are an ocean apart. Waking up without each other is the norm... thank goodness for internet video-conferencing.... without which we would rarely have opportunity to interact. One more year..... *sigh*

Sidney Beck September 23, 2010 at 4:34 AM Hi SKAT, Thanks for the kind remarks you made about my THE GOOD WIFE.....many people fail to see the word tricks contained in it. You may be interested in another, filled with similar tricks, which is called ADVICE FOR LATE TEENS – GOOD TEACHER vs BAD PARENTS. sincere best wishes Syd

Kris Walters September 22, 2010 at 5:55 AM Another emotive hard hitting poem! I loved the beat in this and the rhyme, nicely done! hugs, kris

Harry Horsman September 21, 2010 at 2:45 AM very interesting this, better to be bored than hurt again, SKAT.. Harry

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