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Orange Sun Rising

orange sun rising upon a cold crisp spring day... daffodils' blooms bowed

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/6/2014 4:58:00 PM

Hello Lovely Sara, I just want you to know I am back, and posting again... I miss you, and your haiku... Glad you are still rising with the beauty of the sun... love ~PD

Matthew Anish

Date: 3/3/2014 7:42:00 PM

Fine haiku! You stuck to the 5 7 5 from which is all to the good! Peace & Love Matthew Anihs

Betty Bateson

Date: 2/25/2014 11:10:00 AM

Beautiful and full of hope for Spring.

Cherl Dunn

Date: 2/23/2014 4:45:00 PM

Thank you as always for a ray of spring time, enjoyed it a lot you are one special lady. CHERI

Mark Goodson

Date: 2/23/2014 9:23:00 AM

Sara, you have written a delightful poem, full of imagery for color.

Vincent Flannery

Date: 2/22/2014 4:59:00 PM

Sara your words are always so beautiful. You have such a wonderful descriptive way. Thank you for your loving comment. It made this tattered soul sing out with joy. Take care and God Bess always!

Robert Pettit

Date: 2/22/2014 11:39:00 AM

Those spring days are coming closer. The Phillies play their first spring training game this Wednesday. I can't wait to see those daffodils blooming either. Good write.

Joseph Sergi

Date: 2/22/2014 11:29:00 AM

Sara you say so much with few words the mark of a great poet! Nice work.

Tim B

Date: 2/22/2014 10:11:00 AM

Ah, indeed they would bow to such majesty and it's warming glow to thaw that crisp cold. I thank you for sharing. It would seem that we are both interested in the sun as of late, and perhaps some flowers blooming would be nice too.

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/22/2014 8:09:00 AM

I almost forgot how good you are at these smaller syllable poems. Haiku, Senryu, etc! Well done my friend!!Asavvy1

Russell Sivey

Date: 2/22/2014 6:38:00 AM

We don't even have any flowers up yet...if there were they would be coming up through the snow! The sun is very powerful but the snow is powerful too, keeps it too cold on the ground for anything to grow! I really enjoyed reading this awesome poem here this morning! What a delightful piece, Great Work!!