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Oppressed People

Their bodies stumble through the dark, No mist of air to keep them high... No circling the beaten ground tonight. Voices won’t sing, they will not feed a single blade of welted grass this day. No, not today, not later . Perhaps when evening comes again, the angels will bless clipped wings, live free! . Sparks explode on piercing skies, to drown upon the basement halls. A knife, more cannons , so keenly edged, glimmer bright-- Soon, real soon, the red will run. People's imprints fade to dust where oppression sets sail unto vicious land; time gnawing holy prayers to mumbled speech: an end to things to all that’s bitter-sweet. A simple wish, a dream, reality? How do cries know the which from which? But death comes and goes hat in hand, sometimes, victims begging pain. Sometimes, it hits so desperately, forgets to skip a beat or take the courage to fight the evil terrorism wields? .................................. Written for Richard Lamoureux's PEOPLE Contest 12.11.2017

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Date: 12/15/2017 5:13:00 PM
You chose a very good topic for this contest, Nette. Oppression fuels expressive poetic thoughts. Death and suffering are high on the agenda. ~ Congratulations on your win! Hugs // paul
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Date: 12/12/2017 12:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win, Nette.
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Date: 12/11/2017 7:51:00 PM
Nette, amazing write, very powerful, congratulations on your win :) Hugs
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Date: 12/11/2017 6:45:00 PM
Congrats on your win Nette, Hugs Rick.
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Date: 12/11/2017 6:54:00 AM
So many oppressed people in this world..you described their pain well, nette..best for a win!
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Date: 12/10/2017 8:52:00 PM
Very powerful write, really liked the line "where oppression sets sail unto vicious land"
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Date: 12/10/2017 2:02:00 PM
"how do cries know the which from which" - indeed...I found this compelling Nette
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