Oppressed People

Their bodies stumble
 through the dark,
No mist of air to keep them high...
No circling the beaten ground  tonight. 
Voices  won’t sing, 
they will not feed 
on single bough of welted tree
this day. 
No, not today, not later . Perhaps 
when evening comes again, 
someone would offer 
a morsel of rice on paper; and angels
will bless  their clipped wings, 
to live decently free!


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Written for Richard Lamoureux's PEOPLE Contest
12.11.2017
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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Callus Avatar
December 15, 2017 at 5:13 PM
You chose a very good topic for this contest, Nette. Oppression fuels expressive poetic thoughts. Death and suffering are high on the agenda. ~ Congratulations on your win! Hugs // paul
Sinha-Roy Avatar
December 12, 2017 at 12:54 AM
Congratulations on your win, Nette.
Roper Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 7:51 PM
Nette, amazing write, very powerful, congratulations on your win :) Hugs
Lamoureux Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 6:45 PM
Congrats on your win Nette, Hugs Rick.
Pandit Avatar
December 11, 2017 at 6:54 AM
So many oppressed people in this world..you described their pain well, nette..best for a win!
Vaso Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 8:52 PM
Very powerful write, really liked the line "where oppression sets sail unto vicious land"
Mohn Avatar
December 10, 2017 at 2:02 PM
"how do cries know the which from which" - indeed...I found this compelling Nette
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