Opportunity

Life leaves scratches
        her fear of limitations
        in an unwieldy gait
        uncertain in her body
self wisdom that wounds 
                       knowing missed chances
        what to value, what to preserve?
her edifice cracked by misfortune can be restored
         and every fragment isn't a puzzle

at age sixty, a bootleg feel for indulgence rises
                         flowered dress to fuel her traction
                         as shoebox isolation fades
new force of will
             to seize joy like a ring toss hoop
             to drop the faithful security of mask
             a jump off fences

she follows the river's path to a seniors' dance, 
             skirting forlorn alleyways,
to a hall decorated welcome, like the wave of circus flags
as melodies rising, loosen barricaded thoughts 
           to the beauty of aged embracing
in a slow dance that doesn't feel one sided
            movement that sways in touch
                                a dash of spice
            movement that blooms 
                                        the space around her







Poem  revised July 27, 2022
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May Avatar
August 30, 2022 at 5:26 AM
She finds freedom in the dance, Congrats on your win Brian, Very nicely done
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August 30, 2022 at 6:51 AM
Thank you, Joseph, for a contest that shines light on my overlooked poem, and gives it a new day. Much appreciated, Brian
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January 8, 2022 at 6:40 AM
Life's legacy often leaves us vulnerable to the limits of our bodies. Willful and defiant, we fight the knowledge of our sure demise and get high on the ride. Beautiful work Brian. always, Linda
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January 8, 2022 at 11:18 AM
Very grateful for your insights + affirmative comments on my poem as I had doubts about its value. Be well as we carry on despite aging's limitations. Sincerely Brian
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September 13, 2021 at 7:58 AM
I’m blown away by this one. It has such an organic feel to it. So real and engaging.
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September 13, 2021 at 8:23 AM
Thanks very much for your affirmative note. I re-vised the piece after it received an NA. I appreciate your stop by + support. Cheers Brian
Strand Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 1:08 AM
Yes Brian,my contest philosophy was to re-create a Barnabas effect,which impacted me in the first few months here via a $ cheque contrst.Stay creative
Sambourne Avatar
August 31, 2021 at 9:02 PM
The Barnabas effect was a most interesting search + discovery for me. Many thanks for directing me towards new knowledge. Best wishes, Brian
Strand Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 11:38 AM
Just Beautiful writing I'm glad I found these words today
Sambourne Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 12:36 PM
Thank you, Brian Your grand poetry contests have rescued so many of my submissions from the cave of NA's. I appreciate your kind evaluations. Be well. Brian
Fenn Avatar
August 24, 2021 at 9:14 PM
Hopefully the pandemic will go bye-bye so people can feel safe putting their masks aside and going out like this again! I think this poem conveys that wish that we all have. Good job!
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August 25, 2021 at 6:55 AM
Hello Jennifer, My appreciation for your stop by + comment. This piece was altered through a minor re-write. The March 2020 Seniors' Dance brought fireworks of joy, especially for a dear lady friend who uses a walker. Best wishes, Brian
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August 22, 2021 at 8:57 PM
Love your 'senior moment' Brian. Had lots myself, but not as poetic as this gem.
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August 22, 2021 at 9:18 PM
Thank you, Harry, for your stop by + thoughtful comment. Your portfolio (for me) has been a grand discovery. Sincerest regards, Brian
Kingston Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 7:59 PM
As we age I think we become more graceful and more peaceful. With age we are more knowledgeable about more things we've had time to experience, whether good or bad. I have a teenager that feels differently. I always say like fine wine and cheese we get better with age.
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August 21, 2021 at 8:09 PM
Thank you, Marikate. I appreciate your insights. I will incorporate them, soon, into my writes. Such wise words that you've shared. Best wishes, Brian
Rose  Avatar
August 21, 2021 at 3:03 PM
there is great beauty in aging. Thank you for sharing.
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August 21, 2021 at 5:23 PM
Thank you very much for your stop by + comment. I may re write + extend the poem based on a senior's dance I attended in early March 2020 just before the pandemic lock down. Best wishes, Brian
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August 21, 2021 at 2:41 PM
Truly a very special moment of beauty wearing wisdom's mantle Brian. Somehow inner beauty never fades. Really nice write! All the best.
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August 21, 2021 at 5:25 PM
Hello Sam, Your unfailing support keeps my pen flowing. Thanks very much for your thumbs up. Be well. Sincerely Brian
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