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Soft squish of boots, gurgling footprints following a plodding tread. The riverbed speaks as it enters the mud writes also, a drainage of rivulets cursively signs the rivers name over and over again. As my dark form appears sleepy herons wing-beat air What am I doing here, here where twilight shades loom so damp and charcoal gray? Yesterday, rowing a boat a liquid sunlight upon the water, seeing this nook of land, the way it was so like an aperture, a place emerging and opening a piece of hinterland where a person could walk on its melding surface. At this darkening hour walking to where a skiff was yesterday looking out from this small inlet only to spy another opening, an elemental herons dreamscape not noticed before.

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Date: 6/11/2022 11:42:00 AM
Maybe got a title switched up? The Book is the same poem? This is nice.
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Eric Ashford
Date: 6/12/2022 7:17:00 AM
Thanks Jeff, sounds like it, I'll take a look!

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