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Open Your Eyes

my world became a silent void of nothingness and I wandered lost and frightened then, through the silence came the beating of a drum and I followed the sound into the labyrinth corridors of my mind running down twisted endless passages till I was in a misty place of many stones and my hair was full of shadows and tears and I could hear the dead whispering and then ... a doctor with piercing aqua blue eyes blue like the fathomless sea, said open your eyes and I did ______________________ May 23, 2021 Poetry/Verse/open your eyes Copyright Protected, ID 05-1357-592-23 All Rights Reserved, 2021, Constance La France Written for the Standard contest, All Yours (May 25) sponsor, Brian Strand, Judged 05/25/2021 First Place

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Date: 5/23/2021 9:54:00 AM
wow I feel like you had died and come back to life. excellent ink Constance:-) hugs jan xx
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Constance La France
Date: 5/23/2021 10:14:00 AM
Jan, thank you for the comment, and compliment, I was floating in a limbo world, love _Constance
Date: 5/23/2021 8:37:00 AM
Marvelous writing, Constance, rich with ethereal images and, finally, an awakening in metaphor or reality. Good stuff!
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Date: 5/23/2021 10:14:00 AM
Milt, thanks for the compliment and the wonderful comment, peace _Constance

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