Open Prairies

I stand in the center of an ocean of wheat,
shimmering from the wind like ocean waves. 
The clouds, the sky, the sun, the colors of the fields 
and the touch of the warm gentle breeze.

The wild flowers and trees bordering the land,
the red earth blowing with the wind.
The sound of water from nearby streams,
ease life’s burdens away in a flash.

The vast openness of distant horizons,
as the gold heads rattle with the wind.
The red-tailed hawks squawk in the sky,
the sand-hill cranes head for a pond.

The cows graze on lush green beauty,
as I stand in a field with pen in hand.
This is the beauty I am blessed with,
whether my eyes are closed or open.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2009



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Date: 6/7/2009 3:53:00 PM
No better sight and sound, that what is being broadcast from a lea or meadow, being surrounded by nature, awesome poem>James
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Date: 2/3/2009 2:34:00 AM
Wow, nice poem! the way you describe the prairie is great. Nice use of words.........Danielle
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Date: 2/2/2009 5:59:00 PM
Great descriptions of home, job well done..................nice work
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Date: 2/1/2009 12:24:00 AM
Awesome write Raul, you described home with this one.
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Date: 1/28/2009 5:13:00 PM
"waving from the wind like ocean waves" perhaps "shimmering in the wind..." do you really want to use wave twice? "the red earth blowing in the wind" is my favorite line. Light & Love Debbie Guzzi
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Date: 1/28/2009 4:11:00 AM
I Know Of Such Prairies, Great Tribute To The Open Land. I Share The Same Love. Tyler
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Date: 1/27/2009 11:49:00 PM
I haven't been on in a few days and you have posted so much work. I didn't think I was away that long. This is a fantastic poem about the beautiful prairies I also have a love for. DN
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Date: 1/26/2009 6:27:00 AM
I was transported to this place of warmth and beauty through your clear images in this, Raul. Thank you for letting me see this through your eyes. Love, Robin
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Date: 1/23/2009 4:04:00 PM
This is a good piece of the way the beauty is all around you. I would hate not to see all this around me. Good Job you describe the praires well. Love Elizabeth
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Date: 1/23/2009 12:45:00 PM
The beautiful imagery makes for wonderful reading. Love the last two lines. This poem has me smiling. Blessings to you for sharing your talent with us. Thank you for your kind words regarding my haiku. Karen
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Date: 1/23/2009 6:07:00 AM
Between you and Kristin today I am feeling like I am missing out on so much. Such beauty portrayed. Awesome write dear Raul. Love, Shar
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Date: 1/23/2009 5:19:00 AM
Beautiful, my fellow prairie-soul friend. :) You paint a most pretty picture here, that i know very well. I sure do miss my oceans of gold, skies down to the groud, and the wind through the grass...sigh...i miss home. well done, Raul, always, Kristin P.S-thanks again. :)
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Date: 1/23/2009 4:31:00 AM
Exceptional picture painted Raul. I am there enjoying this moment created by your mind and pen. Great job!
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Date: 1/23/2009 3:54:00 AM
This piece is a beauty...Draws many images of wonder..Thank you for sharing your passion... The young one, Farah
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