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I thought what does it mean when they would say He knocks on all doors no concern if rich or poor To my concern was I surrounded by four walls engulfed in a empty room with no way out could anyone hear me If I where to shout Oh look what is this book My Granddad had given to me Why not see what is inside I have heard Not to judge the cover It is me and this book I open and I begin to read What is that noise I see cracks in the walls outlining a door The more I read it comes to life the words are still alive I begin to believe and to my surprise I hear knock knock who could this be I run to the outline of the door In hope of someone setting me free I yell please save me as I did all four walls Dropped!!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 5/21/2011 6:56:00 PM
I fully agree with this message. He will always answer our cries for help.
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Date: 3/15/2011 8:10:00 AM
If we knock He will answer. If we ask we will receive, if we believe we will find eternal life. Loved this message in your poem. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 1/22/2011 4:00:00 PM
This is a very good poem!! It reminds me of Jesus knocking on our doors, it is up to us to let him in.
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Date: 1/17/2011 10:10:00 AM
reminds me of revelation 3:8 thanks for reading my,it was derived from 2 corinthians 5:7
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