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Open and Close

Between Id and ideation Suicide is salvation Empathy can see behind closed doors When no more of this Is as good as bliss Ego knows the choice is always yours

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David Kavanagh

Date: 10/15/2021 11:52:00 AM

Choice the salvation of man from a fate worse than death, empathetic indeed, brilliant wording and meaningfulness cheers David

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/22/2021 10:04:00 AM

Thank you David! xomo

Jeff Connelly

Date: 10/13/2021 4:25:00 AM

So Sigmund F.

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 11/22/2021 10:03:00 AM

You know it babe.

Rico Leffanta

Date: 10/9/2021 10:19:00 AM

"Empathy can see behind closed doors" is absolutely brilliant, better than Webster or Oxford's!

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/10/2021 11:10:00 AM

Thank you Rico! :))) xomo!

Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/9/2021 8:42:00 AM

This feels both dark and hopeful, you can say so much in just a few lines~

Maureen Mcgreavy
Date: 10/10/2021 11:09:00 AM

Thank you Michelle! ~x