Open

Looking down from a cloud 
Which is nine 
Which is fine 
Hit rewind hit rewind hit rewind hit rewind 

Not too terribly in time 
I should fear I should quit 
So solemn and sublime and sublime and sublime 

All these bugs in my head 
For if else do while when 
Strangle hold on my mind on my mind on my mind 

Search for solutions 
Striking down the evolution 
Logic drive through the stake into their eyes to their eyes 

Looking up from this ground 
Which is earth which is thine 
Open arms open heart open thoughts open mind 

Begin and then again 
I have prayed in the end 
What I've found sets me up puts me down gives me time
Copyright © | Year Posted 2007

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