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did you notice when you dig your nails, I cringe? that strange look is not a smile, but a wince I did let you when you wore that sexy fringe but my back has been complaining ever since just because I call you Baby when we love doesn't mean that you can bite my lower lip and I know you love to wear your leather glove but my cheeks now show the bruises of your grip so when you pull my hair, I'm apt to sneeze and if you pinch my thigh, I'll throw a fit - (still ... ) I have one tiny secret, if you please ... I'm starting to enjoy it ... (quite a bit). ~ 3rd Place ~ in the "Pick A Theme" Poetry Contest, Viv Wigley, Judge & Sponsor.

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Maureen McGreavy The Insolent Rib

Date: 9/3/2018 8:03:00 AM

Sauciness ;) xomo! <3

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/7/2018 8:57:00 PM

Thanks muchly, Mo! ;-) <3

Jan Allison

Date: 9/2/2018 4:01:00 PM

a cheeky little piece in so many ways Greg, many congrats:-) hugs Jan xx

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/7/2018 8:57:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jan, yes, cheeky is a good word for this one - so pleased you liked it! Blessings! :-) <3

Viv Wigley

Date: 9/2/2018 2:41:00 AM

Thanks for entering your saucy piece, gregory, keep those sticking plasters handy, eh? Congrats on your placement. regards, Viv

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 9/2/2018 1:51:00 PM

Thanks so much, Viv, I greatly appreciate the placement ... a little iodine and I'm good to go! (Actually, I'm allergic to iodine now, so Neosporin and a Bandaid, lol). Blessings! ;-)

Winged Warrior

Date: 8/29/2018 11:14:00 AM

Nicely rendered Gregory...for the pic, I see a bunch of squares romantically involved lol...great write...love & light...^WW^

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/30/2018 10:25:00 PM

Many kind thanks, ^WW^, I greatly appreciate the kind words! (Shades of gray, those squares). So happy you liked this one! :-)

Janice Canerdy

Date: 8/29/2018 8:48:00 AM

Oh, my! This one made me chuckle--and raise my eyebrows at the end, Greg! Janice

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/30/2018 10:24:00 PM

LOL - thank you so much, Janice - yes, it IS a bit naughty. So glad you liked it! :-) <3

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/28/2018 2:01:00 PM

mischievous you, gregory... i like how you brought some excitement to this perky write!...huggs

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/30/2018 10:23:00 PM

That's very kind of you, Nette - thank you so much, my friend! :-) <3

Brandy Nicole

Date: 8/28/2018 1:11:00 PM

Yes, there is pleasure in pain- when moments of ecstasy are involved. :) Being in control. I will say, it is something I enjoy. (Of course not in a bad way) There is something exciting about such playfulness. ~ Brandy

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/30/2018 10:23:00 PM

Indeed, and well-said, my friend ... I'm so pleased you enjoyed this! :-) <3

Carole Duet

Date: 8/26/2018 1:41:00 PM

LOL...this is priceless! Careful, Greg, those crazy dominatrices can get a little too wild. haha Great poem! and a FAV for sure

Gregory Richard Barden
Date: 8/27/2018 12:46:00 AM

LOL Thank you so much, Carole, I'm pleased you enjoyed it! I'm not really one for the dominatrix "type", but there is a fascination I have with the line between pain and pleasure, where that lies, and how that is such a fluid and different thing for each of us ... how that ambiguity and dichotomy plays into lovemaking and life in general. Blessings, my friend! :-) <3