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Onslaught

A center stage of flood light probing, desperate living in a murderous onslaught war's naked inhumanity sky tearing rockets, a pinpoint rage casualties that define a battlefield carnage that sticks to history joyless existence for those flash-blinded by fear upgraspable horror that fails comprehension What drives global mayhem? territorial expansion, the lust of thieves the dictator's creed imperialist thrust to chop at a culture's roots to replant borders through blood-shed greed onslaught war in tanks of clattering woe brute spectacle of citizen dislocation Do we ignore war till it comes to us? as history hooks another dark cloak no civilized dictatorship no reserve to deflect blame authoritarianism that hasn't breathed its last for the murderer scheming in plain sight through rubble-years cumulative scars of foes push his nervous tick an unending pleasure malice that sticks like lipstick on a mirror Do we just change one war for another? Or is peace like the buried secrets of mummified souls? still struggling to be heard Knowledge of survival that evaporates like steam Poem composed October 3, 2022 Contest: Pick A Title Volume 32 Sponsor: Edward Ibeh

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Date: 10/30/2022 11:34:00 PM
Wow! What a powerful antiwar poem. "...the lust of thieves the dictator's creed imperialist thrust to chop at a culture's roots to replant borders through blood-shed greed" This is a chilling line and so true. I am grateful there are voices like yours that are not afraid to say it. Great job, Brian!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/31/2022 8:08:00 AM
Hello Thomas, Dreadful news that the slaughter of Ukrainian people goes on. War is a machine that grinds out sorrow. I hope that you are well. Thank you for your affirmative note. With appreciation, Brian
Date: 10/19/2022 3:23:00 AM
Congratulations Brian receiving a winning placement.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/19/2022 6:22:00 AM
Hello Michael, Much appreciate your stop by + congratulatory wishes. I hope that all is well with you. Cheers, Brian
Date: 10/17/2022 5:09:00 AM
Excellent, powerful piece, Brian:-) Heartiest congratulations on your top win in my contest!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/17/2022 6:20:00 AM
Thank you Edward, for the recognition as I never know what to expect when I enter contests. Your kind comments + vote of confidence are much appreciated. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 10/14/2022 8:14:00 PM
War, its outbreak, its causes and the misery and pain it entails- all so powerfully analyzed in this evocative writing. Congrattulations Brian on your well deserved win.
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/14/2022 9:11:00 PM
Thank you, Valsa, for your stop by + affirmative message. I truly value your input. Be well. Brian
Date: 10/14/2022 12:36:00 PM
Great to see a Brian Sambourne poem at the top of the tree where it belongs. 'Onslaught' tells it how it is - ironically in FREE verse. Are you reading Mr Putin & co?
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Gary Radice
Date: 10/14/2022 1:39:00 PM
Hi Brian - I meant to write: "Are you reading this, Mr Putin & Co?" :) He and other dictators could do well reading your excellent poem. Cheers - Gary
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/14/2022 1:09:00 PM
Hi Gary, You certainly know your irony - free verse that touches on Putin's brutal authoritarianism. I follow his dictatorship in the New York Times. Thank you for your thumbs up on my piece. Be well. Brian
Date: 10/14/2022 10:38:00 AM
Oh, your words so terrifyingly beautiful--a summation of humanity. It's beginning to seem we can't accept peace; we refuse to excise hate; future will be repetition of dictatorial past. your poem is wonderful to speak of these truths! Congratulations on your First Place!
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/14/2022 1:15:00 PM
Greetings Ann. Thank you immensely for your affirmative note. I am always delighted + surprised by any placement as free verse is not always accepted in contests if rhyme is preferred. With appreciation, Brian
Date: 10/5/2022 6:15:00 PM
Great entry for the contest, Brian. Best wishes...Hope all is well my friend...Charlie
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 10/5/2022 7:34:00 PM
Thanks very much, Charles. I appreciate your vote of confidence. All is well, thank you. I hope that you are in good health. Cheers Brian

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