Onset

October drives by maple green blushes golden Winter sneers anon

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Date: 11/15/2023 4:44:00 PM

I love the fall not the winter so much! Nice haiku

Arlo Parker
Date: 11/15/2023 8:31:00 PM

Bright colors and crisp air dazzle this Season. Thx. KC. :o)

Date: 10/14/2023 1:26:00 PM

Autumn may stay as long as she likes, I like Autumn. Good Haiku, Arlo. Have a great weekend, my friend. Bill

Arlo Parker
Date: 10/14/2023 9:16:00 PM

Appreciated, Texas Bill!

Date: 10/10/2023 1:16:00 PM

I love this, Arlo, especially the last line. No one hardly ever uses the word 'anon' anymore. Nicely done, Sara

Arlo Parker
Date: 10/10/2023 3:21:00 PM

So happy you found this piece, Mrs. Bill. :-)

Date: 10/8/2023 6:56:00 AM

Great imagery Arlo!

Arlo Parker
Date: 10/8/2023 9:31:00 PM

El Nino on the prowl.

Date: 10/8/2023 2:37:00 AM

Brrr...let it sneer a little longer (lol) Nice haiku, Arlo. Charlie

Arlo Parker
Date: 10/8/2023 9:33:00 PM

Indeed, Fall can slow it's descent!!! Thanks for the comment, CM. :o)