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Only You Babe

Tasting delights softly captured in a keyhole of thoughts , warmly smiling radiates within one porthole , outside the mind opening this heart sweetly yawning dawning twilight . Clouds shades red blushing desire fading to amber , further out from the sun turning shades from gun barrel grey to black setting our scene. kissing outside in thinking of your beauty love , licking deeply tongues on fire warm fluttering rays , hotly kissing each beat, burning passion erupting inside desires.

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Date: 12/29/2015 9:55:00 AM
wow........passionate and deep...rating..
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Liam Mcdaid
Date: 12/29/2015 11:38:00 AM
funny how a person can make one feel my feelings strong in this bless you for the delightful comment
Date: 8/22/2014 9:20:00 AM
Those tongues of fire....WOW. Lovely, Liam...you are a romantic soul.
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Date: 8/22/2014 8:08:00 AM
That is out of this world! Liam, you are making the sun jealous with how hot your kissing is :)
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Date: 8/21/2014 8:08:00 PM
loved your poem great job
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