Only One

If I were allowed, just one last precious day...
Only twenty four hours, to swallow away
To fear, or to fret, what a waste of the gift
So I'll say, I'll confess, what a blessing it is
to be given this choice on how I might spend it.

This last gift bestowed, to spend as I please
Would I want to be shown, the most spectacular things?
What would I do, and how would I choose
My mind would be spinning like whirlwinds in spring

Would I run away to a tropical sun
take a brief holiday, with my hopes on the run?
My mind would be topsy, my soul would be turvy
and my heart would be yearning for those who I love

I have come to conclusion...after pondering, long
The choices, though many, aren't hard to resolve

I would spend it with loved ones, in the same, simple way
With things quite familiar, under the same morning sun 
Time with my with family, so simple and fun
Laughter that rings through a house on a hill,
Hamburgers, sizzling, outside on the grill
Little ones shouting, teasing, frolicking,
Until evening breezes gather us still
In the dark on the porch, while my son plays guitar,
with a dish of ice cream, while counting the stars

Love reaching out with a unspoken sound
filling the silence, of a promise untold
Watching the sunset...in the hilltops above...
How grand is one day....          until the daylight is done....
A perfect days end.....             if left with just one.....

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Contest sponsored by Thomas Martin "Days"
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010


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Date: 5/3/2015 9:23:00 PM
Carrie, Congrats on your awesome win. Forever ~SKAT~
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Date: 5/3/2015 6:28:00 PM
Hey, this is nice. Very well written. I think this is the best of the lot.
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Date: 5/3/2015 6:29:00 PM
So very kind of you to say, Abdul. !! Thank you so much!
Date: 5/3/2015 4:26:00 PM
Congrats on your win Carrie :)
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Date: 8/16/2010 11:01:00 AM
Many congratulations Carrie on your win in Audrey's fine contest. This is most definately my fav, it's a wonderful read >> James
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Date: 8/16/2010 3:17:00 AM
Congratulations! This is a wonderful poem! This sounds like life is going all along in a splendid fashion EVERYDAY!:)
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Date: 8/15/2010 8:17:00 PM
Congrats on the win, Carrie
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Date: 8/15/2010 7:24:00 PM
Congrats Carrie on your winning poem in Audrey's contest just finalized tonight.. a beautiful write and win for u to enjoy today..with luv..
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Date: 8/15/2010 12:10:00 PM
Thanks for submitting your wonderful poem for my first sponsored contest! And congratulations on you 6th Place Win, Carrie! Peace, love, Audrey
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Date: 7/4/2010 2:15:00 PM
Family is so important and doing the simple things in life that we enjoy..Great write that should be in the winners' circle..Keep the creative pen flowing..Thanks for visiting my work and taking time to read and comment...Sara
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Date: 7/4/2010 2:01:00 PM
Loved it Carrie, here i am just stopping by to enjoy your poem very nice, also have your self a wonderful & safe 4th of july. Looks nice outside today,..p..d
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Date: 7/4/2010 1:57:00 PM
Loved your free verse Carrie, with its sprinkling of clever rhyme. Despite the subject your poem has such a light feel, in fact it somewhat reminded me of Dr Seuss. You're so right, it would be an honour to be able to choose that perfect last day. Super poem, I'm sure it will do well in the contest. Thanks for all your kind comments ~ Sharon :)
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Date: 7/4/2010 1:52:00 PM
ok I will enter this for another contest not sure which one though ha ha ha ha sarah x thank you so much for your kind words sarah xx
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Date: 7/4/2010 1:13:00 PM
Oh I LOVE IT LOVE IT LOVE IT ... sarah x
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