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Only In This Space

Only in this space do I exist, spilling into nothingness beyond these borders that hold me here. I am no more than a faint echo clinging to the silence inside your head, a voice seeking form to make this shadowy existence of mine move in a memory or to inflame something left long ago in a sad corner of your life. I have no breath, only these words with which to live for a moment in your mind, not as a person put together with what can be seen, but a mere whisper spoken in a dream, something small, imprisoned in the centre of who you are, an enigma that remains just out of reach of being known, the ephemeral in search of a home.

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Date: 3/24/2023 8:31:00 PM
Thought I'd check out your first post. Impressive to say the least. You write with a natural ease, Paul. A pleasure to read and stimulate my mind:) Be well.
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Paul Willason
Date: 3/25/2023 4:48:00 AM
Thanks Daniel for your very kind words...means a lot. Developed my poetic voice over a number of years, comes out more easily now. It's usually a half a notch up from normal conversational speech patterns, the underlying rhythms give it a slight elevation in tone. Value your support Daniel.
Date: 9/28/2022 8:00:00 PM
So BEAUTIFUL!!! "an enigma that remains just out of reach of being known, the ephemeral in search of a home." The NOTHING that is ALL. The WORDLESS upon which words form.
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/30/2022 5:20:00 PM
Hi Becky, Thankyou for your comments...and wise observation. Valued. Regards, Paul
Date: 9/24/2022 10:32:00 AM
Beautiful sentiments
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/25/2022 6:40:00 AM
Hi Denise, Thankyou for your comments. Always nice to know that sometimes words written in the privacy of your own mind can set off a little ripple elsewhere. Be kind to yourself, Regards, Paul
Date: 8/31/2022 8:51:00 PM
Good to see you are proving once again that Australians can write. Great Poetry. Long may it continue. You have advantage of being down under before us Kiwis, kinda glad you chose that side of ditch, though with climate change not sure which side is safest. Look forward to reading more of your work. Best regards David in NZ
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Paul Willason
Date: 9/1/2022 4:45:00 AM
Many thanks for your encouragement. Would like to think we share the air coming up from the southern ocean which is a tonic for the imagination and imparts a unique way of viewing the world. My grandfather came from NZ so I can claim some connection...I think we have similar national character but differ in the way our landscape seeps into our art and literature. We don't get carried away with glossy hype..a unique sense of humour saves from the excesses seen in other countries. Will make a point to read yr poems... Again, appreciate your comments, regards, Paul.
Date: 8/30/2022 9:01:00 AM
Thanks for sharing this. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." The Lord's blessings be with you.
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