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Oneness

* From a single word the Divine bestows kismets of gifts benign, as we look outside our tiny molecule of life and feel the roaming breath of many realms larger than our jagged existence; that we are just one, one with beggars, thieves, prophets grains, stars… and that we will give back and beget the trebles of light refreshing all … molded we are from only one heaven of omnipresent being; an immutable Source. ** Winds rustle unto adorned foliage they know not of; comets greet milky earth without asking the whys and wherefores of such glides: each mortal heart uttering the same rhyme of peace in different skin colors, as miles navigate the buttresses of time -zones, yet always… always imbued by a holy psalm of enlightened Oneness. *** rob carmack's Contest: One 9/8/2015

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Date: 9/15/2015 3:07:00 PM
I love your wonderful thoughts about "oneness" Nette. "...as we look outside our tiny molecule of life and feel the roaming breath of many realms larger than our jagged existence...that we are just one, ..." Such amazing words for me. Congrats on your 1st Place win! Sandra
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Date: 9/15/2015 7:37:00 AM
Nette, brilliant!
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Date: 9/14/2015 1:03:00 PM
Hi Nette, congrats on your wonderful win. SKAT love :)
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Date: 9/14/2015 4:17:00 AM
Superb take with this very beautiful write n first place win nette! Big congrats!
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Date: 9/13/2015 11:52:00 AM
I love the message this poem imparts, Nette. Being one with the universe and realizing this is so reminds us both of our mortal and cosmic nature. Congratulations! huggs!
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Date: 9/12/2015 7:51:00 PM
lovely piece,great write...Congrats on your well deserved win,Nette....
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Date: 9/12/2015 6:17:00 PM
one poem hitting the top spot Nette many congrats:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 9/8/2015 7:17:00 AM
Beautifully done Nette, makes me feel like we are all complete and One :)
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Date: 9/8/2015 1:24:00 AM
Wonderful nette, such true words tenderly put up! Gl in contest!
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Date: 9/7/2015 11:30:00 PM
How sublime ! You could not write these words unless you are one with our Creator! This is bliss!. Also, thank you for my placement in your last contest, Nette
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Date: 9/7/2015 4:06:00 PM
we are just one, one with beggars...great line and such truth...good luck in the contest
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Date: 9/7/2015 3:24:00 PM
What an adorable write! Dear Nette, i loved it a7!!! Everything finally merging into an eternal oneness of divinity....love, Anu:-) Good luck in contest:-)
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Date: 9/7/2015 2:46:00 PM
Lovely take on the oneness theme Nette good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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