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Poetry/Rhyme/One With Nature
Copyright Protected, ID 12-1602-841-06
All Rights Reserved, 2023, Constance La France

Written, December 06, 2023

For the International Contest, Any Form, Any Theme
Sponsor, Sotto Poet, Judged 12/07/2023

First Place 

Written in my  form called Fragmented Rhyme consisting of indents & rhyme patterns

"My best journey has been the one within." Quote by _Constance
I am on a long stroll, in a deep spiritual quest; my goal is to find my purpose and soul, and by Mother Nature I have been blessed. Like birds I am drifting, with the mighty wind my wings are lifting; I glide, fall, rise, and fly, always shifting. Oh I must sigh, as beneath waters calm I fly; and into the blue sky. The creatures of the forest I console, I thank them as I am a guest; nature gifting, helping me to be whole.

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Date: 12/9/2023 6:47:00 PM
I enjoyed this, as Nature is close to my being... a pleasure!
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Constance La France
Date: 12/10/2023 11:05:00 PM
Paige, thank you so much for sharing and the compliment, appreciate
Date: 12/7/2023 8:03:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. "One With Nature" is a lovely write/quote. Have a wonderful day with your win...............
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Constance La France
Date: 12/10/2023 11:06:00 PM
Paula, thank you so much for the congratulations, comment and compliment, blessings
Date: 12/7/2023 1:44:00 PM
So beautiful... Congratulations on your placement in the contest
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Constance La France
Date: 12/7/2023 5:50:00 PM
Silent, thank you so much for the compliment and congratulations, appreciate
Date: 12/6/2023 3:51:00 PM
I found your poem relatable. When I'm in nature as you so beautifully depicted it, I turn inward...and like you said, that's the best journey. Have a splendid evening, Sara
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Constance La France
Date: 12/7/2023 5:50:00 PM
Sara, thank you so much for the comment and compliment, appreciate
Date: 12/6/2023 9:33:00 AM
Beautiful poem.
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Constance La France
Date: 12/6/2023 12:01:00 PM
Jay, thank you so much for the compliment, appreciate

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