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One Wise Wish

A pearl more precious than possession of knowledge - If I had wisdom beyond that of Solomon, I’d have no need for wishes. For Kristen Bruni's Contest: "If I had One Wish. . . . "

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Robin Davis

Date: 5/6/2014 9:03:00 PM

Andrea A nice wish for someone so "wise". You don't need this to come true, because you are already there. Thank you for the funny and sweet comment on my Chicken To Love poem. Hugs

Harry Horsman

Date: 11/7/2012 3:56:00 PM

if i had your talent Utah Lady, i would not need wishes either... well i went to my list, and it was on page 9, but you have seen it before, the strange aspect is yesterday i only had 5 pages,of poems today 10???? yes i'm a little tied up but still managing to get here a little each day....

Harry Horsman
Date: 11/7/2012 3:57:00 PM

sorry the Robbie Burns Poem

Bl Devnath

Date: 7/2/2011 8:30:00 AM

Your wish is a really wish for wisdom, I know you are there. Nice, Tanka. bl

Ingibo Benson

Date: 6/26/2011 10:07:00 PM

A really nice wish, a lovely poem too. Thanks for your comment Andrea.

Kacey Greenlee

Date: 6/12/2011 7:04:00 AM

I love your wish thinking here.Great stuff.Have a creative day dear...love,Kacey

Insatiable Piyush

Date: 6/3/2011 3:40:00 AM

truly said Andrea..it inspires motivation..gud luck to u..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/2/2011 12:58:00 AM

Ah I believe you are the wise one, sweetie :) so thank you for sharing with me your thoughts with that one, heehee :D & thanks-- for your comments in my monoku, you made me smile so much with that ^_^ you done baking yet?? hugs to you :)

T.A. Skyles-Theoklapoet

Date: 5/31/2011 12:34:00 PM

Such beautiful words Andrea and good luck in the contest.My holiday was just terrific hope yours was to.So was the water nice and warm.Beach days are here to but my days are for fishing.~LOTS OF LUV~Teresa

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/31/2011 7:52:00 AM

AWESOME write Andrea.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/31/2011 6:53:00 AM

thankxx Andrea.. could really envision us as the legendary horses in that piece.. this hot beach has made my creative juices bubble over luv..I recommend for all to do same..haha..luv..

Joe Maverick

Date: 5/29/2011 1:06:00 PM

a great depiction of the need of wisdom that we can learn from Andrea! and best wishes in the contest..

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 5/29/2011 11:51:00 AM

truth be told Andrea .. a lovely and great write for the contest ..if all would possess knowledge for it is power giving wisdom..good luck in the contest with this unique impression my friend.. lovely advice.. am having a blast at the shore...90 plus and sunny delight..oh..

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 5/29/2011 9:57:00 AM

Your title is perfect for this tanka, Andrea! That is definitely wise of you-- wonderful wish to have--- I think you chose your wish really well-- really liked that you related it to pearls -- definitely pearl of wisdom in your write here :) how is your Sunday, sweetie? hugs to you :) and always a pleasure to read your poems, thank you for your sweet comments in mine :D

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/28/2011 3:33:00 PM

whhooot, andie ! a bold, super stunnung, work.. wisdom is clear discernig.. winnig's best to you!! :) huggs, nette

Gwendolen Song

Date: 5/28/2011 2:17:00 PM

http://www.paramountsong.com/song-contests Hi Andrea- Wisdom is the greatest possession of all-Solomon recognized that when he thot he had it all--yet had nothing. This is superb. Hope u are having a great day! Gwendolen

Wilma Neels

Date: 5/28/2011 12:00:00 PM

you wish for wisdom but just check out this clever Tanka ;) awesome entry Andrea.. Good luck for the contest ;) love Wilma

Jack Horne

Date: 5/28/2011 10:38:00 AM

A-ha, very clever, Andrea. I love this one - this has got to be a big winner! Very glad you chose this form - it works wonderfully. Thanks for all your kind comments : )

James Foulk

Date: 5/28/2011 9:21:00 AM

you know this was a great ideal you came up with. Because with Wisdom all the rest will follow. Enjoyed reading this one.Thank you for commenting on Puddles On a Sidewalk.

Matthew Anish

Date: 5/28/2011 7:19:00 AM

Solomon was indeed very wise as you mention. In snyagogue yesterday we discussed what happened to the "Ten Lost Tirbes". Hope you win the conetest and "Happy Memorial Day". Yours Matthew Anish

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 5/28/2011 5:08:00 AM

Seeing your comment was a pleasant surprise. Thank you for remembering Andrea. Sorry my friend for not submitting anything because of a kind of Project work I am currently doing as I am writing a TV serial. It is taking lot of my time, beside other routine works, but I am hopeful that my Musical Story would be liked. I really need good wishes from you & from all my friends. Thank you so much my friend I hope to start submitting soon. . Love & best wishes always…. Ravindra… Andrea Dietrich

Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 5/28/2011 4:56:00 AM

A matchless piece of expressions, which looks to me more precious than any pearl or wishes. If one can get the gift of knowledge with wisdom, the whole world would be at your feet’s. Brilliant piece of imagination, wish and writing my friend. It's Gem from your seasoned pen Andrea and I extend my good wishes for its great success. ( continue in next ) Ravindra

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 5/28/2011 3:19:00 AM

... * “I Shall Fave This Hearts Jewel * By A Beautiful Poetess Queen * Whom Holds Verses As Treasures In The Very Tip * Of Her Lovely Quills Dipped In Colourful Inks Majestic Creations. * Hugs & Kissses * Kisssses & Hugs * Always & Forever * Sarah” *

Sarah Seraphin

Date: 5/28/2011 3:12:00 AM

* “Smile * A Breath of Fragranced Air * That Is My Belief When Beholding Pure Poetic Loveliness * Dear Gifted & Very Beautiful Andrea. * To Hold Wisdom 'Beyond' Solomon * Would Definitely Be A Place Inside Which One Would Wish to So Be. * Yet Even He Were Far From Perfect * Only One Ever Held That Fleshes Distinction. * I Love The Softness of You * As I Love Your Beauty.” * ... cont}

Iolanda Scripca

Date: 5/28/2011 1:01:00 AM

Great Tanka you created, dear Andrea! LOve it! Thank you for visiting my poems :) and for your nice comments. Love, iolanda

Don Johnson

Date: 5/27/2011 10:43:00 PM

Solomon had sometimes gone to see the Queen of Sheba, offered to seperate a baby, true mother said just leave her. Great verse babe...xox,,,,Don