Audrey Haick Poet Diminished Hexaverse

One Universe

Eight spinning spheres
Perfect symmetry
Awesome alignment
Waltz in precision
Evolving with light

Rainbow colors
Suns, moons and stars
Worlds within worlds
One universe

Light and dark
Man and nature
Time and space

Growing
Reaching
ONE!

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Carol Sunshine Brown October 25, 2010 at 10:04 AM Congratulations Audrey on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carol

John Freeman October 15, 2010 at 6:10 PM Congratulations Audrey, on your worthy poem's placement in the top ten. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi September 18, 2010 at 2:23 PM a different take on topicenjoyed muchly! Congrad's Light & Love NICE!

Dr.Ram Mehta September 17, 2010 at 12:49 PM Congratulation on this wonderful win in the contest, Audrey

Caryl Muzzey September 17, 2010 at 8:58 AM A wonderful write, congratulations on your win. Caryl

Francine Roberts September 17, 2010 at 7:44 AM love it , congrats on your win

Carol Sunshine Brown September 17, 2010 at 6:43 AM Congratulations on your win Audrey in Rick Parise's contest "The Universe" Love, Carol

Charles Henderson September 16, 2010 at 8:47 PM This amazing write deserves a good placement. I especially like "worlds within worlds but one universe. Charles

Harry Horsman September 16, 2010 at 8:37 PM Like this excelleny poem, congrats on this winning entry. Harry

Constance La France September 16, 2010 at 8:16 PM Congratulations on 5th place ~~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart September 16, 2010 at 3:14 PM Congrats my BBF on your big win in the Universe contest.. a lovely piece.. enjoy your top spot my sweet friend..with luv.. your BBF always..

Barbara Gorelick September 16, 2010 at 2:30 PM Congrats Audrey, this is terrific..BG

Wilma Neels September 16, 2010 at 1:31 PM Audrey super congrats on your win in Rick's contest ;) love wilma

James Fraser September 16, 2010 at 1:20 PM Congratulation's Audrey on your fine win in Rick's contest. It's a joy to read it again >> James

Joyce Johnson September 16, 2010 at 1:15 PM Congratulations on your win. a great one. Love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire September 16, 2010 at 12:38 PM So glad to see you in the winners' circle, Dimples. Congratulations on your big win! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards September 16, 2010 at 12:30 PM "Waltz in precision..." I love that line!! The whole poem is wonderful! Congratulations, Audrey!! ~ love, Carrie

James Fraser September 13, 2010 at 12:47 PM And there are many that have still to be shown to human eyes, but they will one day if we behave. We just may see new worlds and meet ourselves once again. Good luck in the contest Audrey >> James

Wilma Neels September 12, 2010 at 9:17 AM Audrey an awesome entry, all the best in the contest, hope your Sunday's been a great one, love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich September 10, 2010 at 11:23 PM I LOVE your approach to this one. May I borrow your idea? Haha. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire September 7, 2010 at 7:37 AM You really work well in this form, Audrey. Terrific vision in this poem about the universe and our solar system. Will try fishing again today. Hope springs eternal. LOL Love and best wishes in the contest, Carolyn

Faleshia Murphy September 7, 2010 at 4:45 AM very nice what a great write loved it faleshia

Sara Kendrick September 7, 2010 at 3:43 AM Very descriptive and expressive write about our world..Glad that I chose this one to read..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta September 6, 2010 at 7:03 PM It is nice Diminished Hexaverse. Quite new to me. hope to try it. well expressed thoughts on One Universe, Audrey

Deb Wilson September 6, 2010 at 6:52 PM Very well written ..best of luck..Take care~Deb

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