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One Universe

Eight spinning spheres Perfect symmetry Awesome alignment Waltz in precision Evolving with light Rainbow colors Suns, moons and stars Worlds within worlds One universe Light and dark Man and nature Time and space Growing Reaching ONE!

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 10/25/2010 10:04:00 AM

Congratulations Audrey on your win in Rick's contest. Love, Carol

John Freeman

Date: 10/15/2010 6:10:00 PM

Congratulations Audrey, on your worthy poem's placement in the top ten. Agape, Moses

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/18/2010 2:23:00 PM

a different take on topicenjoyed muchly! Congrad's Light & Love NICE!

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/17/2010 12:49:00 PM

Congratulation on this wonderful win in the contest, Audrey

Caryl Muzzey

Date: 9/17/2010 8:58:00 AM

A wonderful write, congratulations on your win. Caryl

Francine Roberts

Date: 9/17/2010 7:44:00 AM

love it , congrats on your win

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/17/2010 6:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win Audrey in Rick Parise's contest "The Universe" Love, Carol

Charles Henderson

Date: 9/16/2010 8:47:00 PM

This amazing write deserves a good placement. I especially like "worlds within worlds but one universe. Charles

Harry Horsman

Date: 9/16/2010 8:37:00 PM

Like this excelleny poem, congrats on this winning entry. Harry

Constance La France

Date: 9/16/2010 8:16:00 PM

Congratulations on 5th place ~~

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 9/16/2010 3:14:00 PM

Congrats my BBF on your big win in the Universe contest.. a lovely piece.. enjoy your top spot my sweet friend..with luv.. your BBF always..

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 9/16/2010 2:30:00 PM

Congrats Audrey, this is terrific..BG

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/16/2010 1:31:00 PM

Audrey super congrats on your win in Rick's contest ;) love wilma

James Fraser

Date: 9/16/2010 1:20:00 PM

Congratulation's Audrey on your fine win in Rick's contest. It's a joy to read it again >> James

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/16/2010 1:15:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. a great one. Love, Joyce

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/16/2010 12:38:00 PM

So glad to see you in the winners' circle, Dimples. Congratulations on your big win! Love, Carolyn

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/16/2010 12:30:00 PM

"Waltz in precision..." I love that line!! The whole poem is wonderful! Congratulations, Audrey!! ~ love, Carrie

James Fraser

Date: 9/13/2010 12:47:00 PM

And there are many that have still to be shown to human eyes, but they will one day if we behave. We just may see new worlds and meet ourselves once again. Good luck in the contest Audrey >> James

Wilma Neels

Date: 9/12/2010 9:17:00 AM

Audrey an awesome entry, all the best in the contest, hope your Sunday's been a great one, love Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/10/2010 11:23:00 PM

I LOVE your approach to this one. May I borrow your idea? Haha. LUv, Andrea

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 9/7/2010 7:37:00 AM

You really work well in this form, Audrey. Terrific vision in this poem about the universe and our solar system. Will try fishing again today. Hope springs eternal. LOL Love and best wishes in the contest, Carolyn

Faleshia Murphy

Date: 9/7/2010 4:45:00 AM

very nice what a great write loved it faleshia

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/7/2010 3:43:00 AM

Very descriptive and expressive write about our world..Glad that I chose this one to read..Thanks for stopping by and commenting on my work..Sara

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 9/6/2010 7:03:00 PM

It is nice Diminished Hexaverse. Quite new to me. hope to try it. well expressed thoughts on One Universe, Audrey

Deb Wilson

Date: 9/6/2010 6:52:00 PM

Very well written ..best of luck..Take care~Deb