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One Sweet Moment

Glittering like bright stars I see is one sweet moment etched in time. Your tender eyes gazing at me, glittering like bright stars I see, are with me an eternity. Your mouth on mine. Oh, how sublime! Glittering like bright stars I see is one sweet moment etched in time. July 24, 2018 for Kai Michael Neumann's "That Moment in Time Contest

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L. J. Carber

Date: 9/24/2018 9:01:00 AM

Congrats Andrea, on your win in Brian's contest!

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 8/18/2018 1:31:00 PM

Congrats Andrea. It is nice to see you be a top winner. I know those N/A's sting! Hugs, Connie : ) xxoo

Susan Gentry

Date: 8/18/2018 9:30:00 AM

Back to congratulate you again for your win again - #1. Lovely lyrical poem! :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 8/17/2018 4:34:00 PM

A sweet winner, Andrea. Congrats.

Eve Roper

Date: 8/12/2018 6:41:00 PM

Congratulations on your great win, Andrea! Hugs Eve

Susan Gentry

Date: 8/11/2018 6:35:00 PM

Congratulations on your #1 win. Beautiful.

Constance La France

Date: 8/10/2018 1:58:00 PM

Andrea congratulations on your win in my contest with this lovely write!

Charlie Smith

Date: 8/10/2018 9:48:00 AM

Congratulations Andrea...

Susan Ashley

Date: 8/9/2018 9:43:00 PM

Congratulations, Andrea, for your excellent win with your rhythmic and romantic poem. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

John Gondolf

Date: 8/9/2018 9:17:00 PM

Andrea, congrats on your win for this lovely triolet. Jobn

Gershon Wolf

Date: 8/9/2018 8:56:00 PM

Gorgeous, lyrical poesy, Andrea! Congrats on your top prize in the contest. Best wishes, Gershon

Marc Acrich

Date: 8/2/2018 12:14:00 PM

Nice This could be a song

James Inman

Date: 7/28/2018 8:07:00 AM

A sweet lovely memory.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 7/26/2018 2:58:00 AM

Very lovely and romantic Andrea. I always marvel at your abundance of creativity! : )

Marc Acrich

Date: 7/25/2018 1:30:00 PM

Very nice, do you ever read these to your hubby, I send mine to my wife, but then again im insecure, had a bad run with an idiot, The block button is the best no need to get any more upset and the bottom line is about people being shallow, deep poems not everyone gets them

Charlie Smith

Date: 7/25/2018 11:54:00 AM

Nice moment Andrea, best wishes in the contest...