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you May- think me odd perhaps strange peculiar and off the wall- but I like to wander cemeteries among rows on rows I love the tranquility there is a peace like no other where hidden birds sing melodies and little creatures scurry and time stands still and I like to read inscriptions on tombstones in the dappled sun or rain wet or snow covered gravestones monolith flagstones flat and small all the RIP inscriptions among rows on rows the relic stones I do adore those traces of family history faded now and obscure covered in moss some toppled over I have to get close to read and even then it is a mystery on a bright sunny day camera in hand journal ready my mind at peace I noted one stone inscription reading U N K N O W N this of all the stones this broke my heart among rows on rows no name no date no record no flowers ever I am sure no memorial of any kind a homeless man, perhaps or woman, maybe a baby unwanted so sad of all the commemorative slabs the huge monuments with many names with beautiful words engraved of remembrance with dates and names this unknown stone has broken my heart . . . ____________________________ November 9, 2017 Poetry/Free Verse/'One Stone- Unknown' Copyright Protected ID 17-9810-99-0 All Rights Reserved. Written Under Pseudonym. Submitted into the contest, Impress ME' With A New Poem sponsor, A SKAT Tenth Place __________________________ Written for the contest, Two Word Challenge sponsor, John Lawless Second Place

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Date: 1/30/2018 2:33:00 AM
You are not mad, but honour the dead, their beauty, misery, histories and misery. The last time I walked a cemetery in Istanbul, I stumbled on some bone and it was indeed a human femur...
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Date: 1/21/2018 7:51:00 AM
This is very deep and sad, Constance, touching too, congratulations:)
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Date: 1/19/2018 11:59:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your well-deserved win, Constance, so very deep and emotional, with heart-wrenching sincerity and melancholy - blessings and keep up the wonderful work, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 1/18/2018 10:50:00 AM
My GOD this is soooo touching! An absolutely beautiful, heartbreaking write BW!! Really enjoyed this one. Congratulations on your win!! ~Judy
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Date: 1/17/2018 10:17:00 PM
Oh, I really enjoyed this poem-- because I too love to roam through a quiet cemetery, imagining the lives of all those who once lived in this world. Even the sadness you felt I experienced when I visited one particular cemetery where, for some unknown reason, all the infants who died are buried near the front entrance, in a long line as it were.
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Date: 1/17/2018 8:36:00 PM
Constance, I can see why this one was so special to you. I really liked the assonance of the title phrase and the way you used the "row upon row" refrain for emphasis. As Line says, this is very touching. a FAVE for me. Congrats on your win.
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Date: 1/17/2018 8:31:00 PM
Very touching. Beautiful poem, BW.
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Date: 1/17/2018 7:28:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, Broken Wings! Hugs Eve
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Date: 1/17/2018 3:48:00 PM
Broken Wings, thank you for entering my recent contest. Congratulations on your Awesome win. <3 SKAT
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Date: 1/9/2018 7:58:00 AM
I agree with you, there's something about the solace...good luck sweet lady :) -luloo
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