One Stone


We take for granted every day of life
not thinking what regenerates each one...
just dealing with our happiness or strife; 
achievement of our goals when day is done.

Like tiny ants, we scurry here and there,
not seeing past our minuscule domain;
to us, a giant globe held up in air
we feel secure upon our Earth's terrain.

But when we start to think of 'the beyond',
perspective changes as we realize
Earth shares a grand relationship and bond
to all that is and moves behind our skies.

We live upon one stone of billions spun,
that twirl around a star that is their Sun.

~1st Place~
Contest: January 2019
Sponsor: Brian Strand
Judged: 01/11/2019

~2nd Place~
Contest: A Stunner 2017
Sponsor: Line Gauthier
Judged: 03/12/2018

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Date: 1/11/2019 1:07:00 AM
Lovely, Sandra. Congrats on your top win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/14/2019 8:43:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/13/2018 8:29:00 PM
Nice to see this one again, this time on a winners list. Congrats, Sandra!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 1/14/2019 8:44:00 AM
A belated thank you to you, Agnes! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 3/12/2018 8:06:00 PM
Great piece, Sandra, picturing the whole scheme of the universe. We have an inflated view of little world within our tiny planet. What a network of space that we know so little about. Congratulations on your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/13/2018 10:08:00 AM
Thanks so much, Reason, for your very supportive comments. Much appreciated! Sandra
Date: 3/12/2018 3:32:00 PM
Amazing perspective, Sandra. Well done and congrats on your win.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 3/13/2018 10:06:00 AM
Thank you, Line. I am pleased that you enjoyed reading it. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 12/5/2017 5:37:00 PM
Sandra, this is a great poem. Have a nice evening my friend.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/8/2017 3:46:00 PM
Thank you, Darlene, for the visit and positive comments! Much appreciated. Sandra
Date: 11/30/2017 9:58:00 AM
Don't know how I missed this one. I really enjoyed it!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 12/8/2017 3:45:00 PM
Thank you so much, Sunlite! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/25/2017 11:25:00 AM
Wonderful, Sandra. Awesome take on the one stone.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/28/2017 7:41:00 AM
Thank you so much, Line! Sandra
Date: 11/11/2017 11:07:00 PM
Wow a spectacular Sonnet Sandra! Brilliant in rhyme, meter, imagery and fantastic theme. Your final couplet beautifully concludes an amazing write. Excellent and enjoyed! Good luck in the contest!
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/13/2017 7:59:00 AM
Thank you very much, Susan, for your uplifting and positive comments. I am pleased that you enjoyed it! Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/8/2017 2:02:00 AM
I like the way you lead to the concluding couplet Sandra. I like this very much.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/13/2017 7:57:00 AM
Thanks, James. I appreciate your positive and supportive comments. Sandra
Date: 11/6/2017 5:07:00 PM
I will add this GREAT sonnet to my favorites, Sandra! Janice
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/13/2017 7:57:00 AM
Oh, thank you so much, Janice. I am so pleased that you enjoyed it, and I appreciate the Fav. Hugs, Sandra
Date: 11/4/2017 10:05:00 AM
Wonderful Sonnet Sandra, loved the last two lines, best wishes...
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/6/2017 3:27:00 PM
Thank you so much, Charlie! Sandra
Date: 11/3/2017 6:53:00 PM
I am still pondering where to take the one stone prompt and love what you have done with it. Good luck in the contest.
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Sandra Haight
Date: 11/6/2017 3:27:00 PM
Thank you for your nice comment, Agnes. I am sure you will come up with something spectacular! Hugs, Sandra
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