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One Portrait, Two Paint It

Take life as portrait And destiny as sealed fate, It’s arrow-like straight: Ye paint life how so ye like, What fate paints, out ye can’t strike. ______________________________ Tanka | 02.03.2023 | life, fate, portrait

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Date: 3/4/2023 1:47:00 AM
I love the concept of the title of the poem. My mind went to how one subject of the painting could be viewed in many different ways by different artists and although vastly different they could all be accurate. Might be a different angle, but I found your poem thought provoking :)
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