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One Perfect Day*****part 2

Concourse "C" Part 2 She screams in excitement running to Asavvy poet arms extended, fine. Voluptuous, divine. Leaning on the wall, professionally dressed. She shows impress, this hearts empress. His angel without wings, her invisible halo shines above. Already lost in her eyes he knows it must be love. Four years of conversation, a companion over the phone. Cyber sex through video windows. Alone now, in this Marriot suite, room two zero three. Her bodies his retreat. A vacation hot spot, her honey pot, stimulating his astronaut. Heavy, her waterfall. Steamy, they pump their distant love. They lay, embraced, the hotel room in disarray Some call this fate. That destiny has its ways. In that their souls were interconnected, to share this perfect day.. Jared Pickett 1/21/06

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Date: 1/27/2010 7:10:00 AM
People keep saying you can't find love over the Internet, but I think you have proven them wrong, Jared. Sometimes it's easier to share our most private thoughts through the written word. And it's great you found happiness together when you finally met. Really enjoyed the story behind this great poem! Love, carolyn
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Date: 1/25/2010 7:10:00 PM
Jared...I was going to comment earlier when I first read your poem but when I read it my machine over heated and smoke was coming out of it....So I waited until it cooled down to tell you how HOT this poem is!!! Another winner!! Marty
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Date: 1/25/2010 7:03:00 PM
I've had many perfect days myself so sounds like a really good encounter ... expressive words and scenes within your words... visual vibrancy... enjoyed this ride... luv.. "Sweetheart"
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Date: 1/25/2010 11:24:00 AM
What a fantasy.Just wanted to stop by and say good morning and I hope you have a great day.
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Date: 1/25/2010 9:06:00 AM
Jared, You make me blush.. young man! Passion you shared in words... perhaps just a fantasy, but you write so real. God be with you. (The train...Zoom! is posted. Thanks for reading my work.) Lovingly, Dane Ann
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Date: 1/25/2010 8:55:00 AM
Wow....Steamy Jared!!! Nice...Jeralynn
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