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One nightfall, fistful of moons ago A harvest moon was in full view. Her hands clasped around his neck When he held her close and kissed her, time stood still. All the stars in the twilight sky aligned. The passion in their eyes, aglow They foxtrotted; serenaded by a hermit thrush. Lost in nirvana were they A nightfall so magical. Unforgettable. Submitted for... ''N'' Poems, New or Old Poetry Contest Sponsored by Constance La France Date submitted: 09/19/2021 Former title: One Nightfall Theme chosen: Nightfall Date originally written: 02/14/2021

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Date: 9/26/2021 9:49:00 AM
Edward, congratulations on your win! Your images are so fresh - "foxtrotted," " a fist full of moons ago" just a couple of examples. They really make this romantic poem standout like the moon at nightfall. Sending blessings your way!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/26/2021 9:58:00 AM
Thank you very much, Sam:-) Peace and love
Date: 9/22/2021 2:52:00 PM
Edward, congratulations on your win in my N contest with this beautiful poem, splendid writing ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 9/22/2021 3:46:00 PM
Thank you very much for my placement and the wonderful feedback, Constance:-) Most appreciated.
Date: 4/5/2021 6:22:00 AM
A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Edward. Janice
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/5/2021 6:26:00 AM
Thank you very much, Janice:-) Peace and love, Edward.
Date: 4/3/2021 11:12:00 AM
absolutely enchanting edward many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 4/3/2021 3:05:00 PM
Thank you very much indeed, Jan:-) Have a wondrous Easter, my friend!
Date: 4/3/2021 5:26:00 AM
YES. MAGICAL. Congrats to win.
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Date: 4/3/2021 6:08:00 AM
Thanks for dropping by with the congrats, Anisha:-) Happy Easter!
Date: 2/15/2021 6:26:00 AM
Nice to be in such a state of nirvana. Magical indeed!
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Edward Ibeh
Date: 2/15/2021 9:51:00 AM
Thank you, Vijay:-)

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