One Moment

Two women hug near the breath of a steaming oven. The beef stew bubbles.  Aroma floats upward in a canopy of captured mist. The air stout with scents of apple pie, dumplings, roasted chicken. For two women who've had a history together that has skipped through decades. They hug tightly in a quiet blanket of comfort. It's time that cries with them like splattered grease on the wall from eggs frying. Two women wiggle free from labels, in this stolen moment, in the coarse twilight, the clumsy clutch of need. They've built life's private scaffold, a shared life on which to hang their sign: Diner Closed, Pandemic Grieving.

                          undertow of loss
                   yawning void of tomorrow
                      that left hope dangling






Haibun Composed: April 29, 2021
Contest:Moments of Reflection
Sponsor: Malabika Ray Choudhury
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Kendrick Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 5:17 AM
Congrats on your winner. I can't imagine how hard this year plus has been on some people who have businesses. Creative work to describe more than one topic on our minds recently. Sara
Sambourne Avatar
June 6, 2021 at 6:30 AM
Greetings Sara, Much appreciation for your stop by + carefully crafted comments. Thank you for your thoughtfulness. Best wishes, Brian
Ray Choudhury Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 4:49 PM
Congratulations on your win. BW ~ Mala
Sambourne Avatar
May 11, 2021 at 6:31 PM
Interesting contest, Mala. My first Haibun. Thank you for the placement. Brian
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