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One Moment

Two women hug near the breath of a steaming oven. The beef stew bubbles. Aroma floats upward in a canopy of captured mist. The air stout with scents of apple pie, dumplings, roasted chicken. For two women who've had a history together that has skipped through decades. They hug tightly in a quiet blanket of comfort. It's time that cries with them like splattered grease on the wall from eggs frying. Two women wiggle free from labels, in this stolen moment, in the coarse twilight, the clumsy clutch of need. They've built life's private scaffold, a shared life on which to hang their sign: Diner Closed, Pandemic Grieving. undertow of loss yawning void of tomorrow that left hope dangling Haibun Composed: April 29, 2021 Contest:Moments of Reflection Sponsor: Malabika Ray Choudhury

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Date: 6/6/2021 5:17:00 AM
Congrats on your winner. I can't imagine how hard this year plus has been on some people who have businesses. Creative work to describe more than one topic on our minds recently. Sara
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 6/6/2021 6:30:00 AM
Greetings Sara, Much appreciation for your stop by + carefully crafted comments. Thank you for your thoughtfulness. Best wishes, Brian
Date: 5/11/2021 4:49:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. BW ~ Mala
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Brian Sambourne
Date: 5/11/2021 6:31:00 PM
Interesting contest, Mala. My first Haibun. Thank you for the placement. Brian

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