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One Liner- Shallow

If your love for me was the waters on which the Titanic met its epic plunge...nobody on deck would get wet.

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/10/2015 4:43:00 PM

Jen, WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Grace Mutindi

Date: 12/7/2015 9:06:00 AM

This is wonderful and well thought of Jen...congrats on your win and a warm welcome to poetry soup!

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 12/6/2015 6:54:00 PM

Hi Jen, this is such an excellent first posting that I enjoyed reading! I look forward to reading more of your work! Welcome to PoetrySoup and best wishes as you continue to churn out wonderful poetic pieces! Warmest regards and a score of 7 for your win! Pandita

Kim Merryman

Date: 12/5/2015 10:26:00 PM

Well done! Congrats on your win, Jen! Love, Kim

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 12/5/2015 8:32:00 PM

This is quite clever, an excellent first offering.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/5/2015 6:54:00 PM

What an interesting one!! Congrats on the winners' list.

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores

Date: 12/5/2015 6:11:00 PM

Congratulations Jen.

Jan Allison

Date: 12/5/2015 12:23:00 PM

congrats on your win Jen:-) hugs Jan xx

Skat A

Date: 12/5/2015 11:27:00 AM

Jen,,Lovely win.... Love Skat

Edward Ebbs

Date: 12/5/2015 9:15:00 AM

My wish is your always stay dry in these matters, congrats!

Casarah Nance

Date: 12/5/2015 7:51:00 AM

A well referenced write, grats on your win.

Skat A

Date: 12/4/2015 8:21:00 PM

Jen, Welcome to Poetry Soup. It will be a delight to read and become familiar with your poems in the future. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT