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One Leap Tanka Contest

Climbing the gate fast The big sign posted says 'Closed'; Beautiful water summoning my rebellion, with one leap I'm in the pool

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/20/2012 12:59:00 PM
Super nice work! Enjoyed your creation. :) gwendolen
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Date: 12/20/2012 5:53:00 AM
Big congratulations on your win Melani love xx
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Date: 12/19/2012 8:40:00 PM
Melani :-) stopping by CONGRATULATE you with your awesome win in Susan's "Tanka " contest... good write~PD
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Date: 12/19/2012 3:59:00 PM
I really loved it and am very happy it made the list. BIG congrats on your big win.
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Date: 12/11/2012 3:16:00 PM
This one shows a free spirit. ME LIKEY!!
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