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Will she have one last tear to spare The tears she shed are all in vain Through misty eyes she sees despair And all that's left, a sad refrain When love is lost it hurts so much Will she have one last tear to spare She longs for that tender touch And to find someone who'll care A song of heartbreak is all she'll hear It's empty melody plays through her mind Will she have one last tear to spare Is it only teardrops she'll find? Her azure skies have turned to gray Her broken heart needs repair The price of love in tears she'll pay Will she have one last tear to spare? 2-3-19 H'' Contest, New Or Old Poems Sponsor: Constance LaFrance

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Date: 9/11/2021 10:54:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. What a lovely yet sad story/write. Love your line "Will she have one last tear to spare?" I would say the answer is yes. Have a blessed day/weekend.................
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Date: 9/8/2021 9:44:00 PM
Joseph, congratulations on your win in my "H" Contest, New or Old with your wonderful poem ~ peace and tranquility _Constance
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Date: 2/7/2019 3:20:00 AM
- Joseph, congratulations on your great winning poem ... writing about tears is a sensitive theme :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 2/6/2019 6:58:00 PM
Congratulations Joseph, on this win. ~ Brandy
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Date: 2/6/2019 2:52:00 PM
Bobby, your poem is sooo well written and I love the way you made use of the quatern form here. I'm stopping back with congratulations on your well-deserved win! Best wishes, carolyn
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Joseph May
Date: 2/6/2019 5:02:00 PM
Thanks Carolyn..I am Joseph!
Date: 2/6/2019 1:42:00 PM
There is no pain like lost love Jo... You expressed this deeply.. Congratulations on your placement in the contest..
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Joseph May
Date: 2/6/2019 5:03:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Silent One..
Date: 2/4/2019 5:31:00 AM
Sad and genuinely moving, Joseph. I like poems that create warm and sympathetic characters and you did that very well here. Best wishes, Carolyn
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Date: 2/3/2019 6:39:00 PM
Perhaps she knows someone is out there, someone cares. She may be afraid to open her heart. I believe she will find love, or love will find her. When the time is right. Your thoughts are beautiful and tender. I am wrapping them softly around me. ~ Brandy
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Date: 2/3/2019 10:56:00 AM
Hi Joseph, This is a good entry for the contest theme. It looks like a winner to me. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis
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Date: 2/3/2019 10:52:00 AM
Enjoyed the repeated refrain of the quatern form to emphasize your theme, Joseph. Very well written..a superb poem! Good luck in the contest! :)
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Date: 2/3/2019 10:01:00 AM
Lovely flow and tone..enjoyed the read, Joseph...a sure win.
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Date: 2/3/2019 9:22:00 AM
Lovely done. xomo
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