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One Hot Beach

. With violent knots tip she did And there we found ourselves dry and red

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Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 1/4/2012 5:25:00 PM

Wet and wild more fun!?

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/4/2011 9:24:00 PM

Was this the knot of her bikini top?? sorry, I am like daver down here, body going out on me and mind almost gone. haha. I am picturing some tipped over beach lovers here!

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 4/4/2011 12:32:00 PM

Red and Violet ..two of my favorite colors entwined in lines so beautifully James.. such fun on the hot beach.. my favorite place to be always ... so very sorry about your Mother..luv.. I surely was unaware of this and will pray for her soul my friend.. so happy my write touched u .. I have several poems dedicated to my Mother.. my breath of life was she, and every word true as written luv. thankxxx...we are now kindred spirits ...

Hgarvey Daniel Esquire

Date: 4/4/2011 12:11:00 PM

Dear James, the Title grabbed my Eyes Wow!! YOUR Words capture the Heart I Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments of Late You Make me feel like a POET LOVE ALWAYS YOUR Liege...HG ( Harry )

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 4/4/2011 9:49:00 AM

Ahhh -- Naive Nellie here sees more than one meaning, James. Maybe I'm finally catching on? Enjoyed your poem! Love, Carolyn

Wilma Neels

Date: 4/2/2011 9:12:00 PM

James another one of those that can go so many ways ;) enjoyed it this morning, love Wilma

Dana Smith

Date: 4/2/2011 4:43:00 PM

Ohh James, how I love your wonderful poetry.. You know what!! I think YOU belong on my favorite poets! =P there we gooo.=] take care of yourself dear poet, looking forward to reading more, hopefully you'll have another one for me to read today? Yes, no, maybe so? Let me know when you do=]

Daver Austin

Date: 4/2/2011 10:31:00 AM

OUCH! (I think) Are the knots nautical measures? Is tip the tipping of the boat? Forgive me, I am old. The body is gone, the mind going. As ever, I am a devoted fan. Love, Dave

James Peranteau
Date: 8/4/2023 11:55:00 PM