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These lonely tears, cold as the night I shed for sake of thee Time may fade from black and white But thou wilt ever be with me As suns will set within my heart Lord, spare the sorrow I may see All this grief doth play its part But thou wilt ever be with me As I walk this unfamiliar lane Inviting hope to set me free It's but one love that stills the pain And thou wilt ever be with me. 02/06/2019

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Ravindra K Kapoor

Date: 9/13/2019 10:11:00 PM

You have created a beauty wrapped with tears of words coming out from your heart. Very nicely crafted poem dear friend. Sorry dear friend I missed your comment of May 19 on my Tribute on Mother's Day poem. With best wishes ...Ravindra K kapoor

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 7/15/2019 12:54:00 PM

Hello Charlie Smith, this poem is so beautifully written. It reads as a prayer. have a nice day my friend.

Swetha Vangaveti

Date: 5/15/2019 12:08:00 AM

"And thou wilt ever be with me." - these words are a revival of hope :)

Arturo Michael

Date: 4/9/2019 4:12:00 AM

And that love is forever....Lovely...

Charlie Smith
Date: 4/13/2019 6:12:00 AM

Thank you Arturo...

Chuck Melugin

Date: 3/27/2019 8:30:00 AM

Charlie you write your butt off! I hear a song here! Your pen drips gold as your heart orchestrates!

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/27/2019 9:51:00 AM

Thanks Chuck...

Robert Lindley

Date: 3/3/2019 4:42:00 PM

Awesome verses as always your great pen bleeds! I especially loved the second stanza!!! A fav.. a superbly crafted creation my great friend.

Charlie Smith
Date: 3/4/2019 11:59:00 AM

Thank you Robert...

Harry Horsman

Date: 2/10/2019 4:40:00 PM

One beautiful poem, Charlie, love it...

Charlie Smith
Date: 2/12/2019 6:42:00 AM

Thank you Harry.

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 2/8/2019 12:17:00 PM

- A small ... but so rich poem ...... it's lovely, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Charlie Smith
Date: 2/10/2019 7:52:00 AM

Thank you Anne-Lise...

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 2/8/2019 7:07:00 AM

So tenderly romantic, even though a shed of sadness appears dear Charlie! Superb!

Charlie Smith
Date: 2/10/2019 7:52:00 AM

Thank you Demetrios,,,

Silent One

Date: 2/7/2019 5:42:00 AM

What a sad poem Charlie, this one would have been perfect for my last contest, the last tear...

Charlie Smith
Date: 2/7/2019 11:32:00 AM

I missed the deadline, I suppose. Thanks SO...

Robert L. Hinshaw

Date: 2/6/2019 3:29:00 PM

You said it so well in these lines, Charlie. Having lost my dear wife Vera of 66 years in July, these words are of great comfort to me and as I wrote in a recent poem about her passing "you'll ever be my wife through all eternity" - Bob

Charlie Smith
Date: 2/7/2019 11:21:00 AM

Sorry for your loss Bob, I wrote this for an old friend's wife who just lost her husband of 55 years. She seems to be just lost...