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Forever Love

These lonely tears, cold as the night
I shed for sake of thee
Time may fade from black and white
But thou wilt ever be with me

As suns will set within my heart
Lord, spare the sorrow I may see
All this grief doth play its part
But thou wilt ever be with me

As I walk this unfamiliar lane
Inviting hope to set me free
It's but one love that stills the pain
And thou wilt ever be with me.

02/06/2019

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Ravindra K Kapoor September 13, 2019 at 10:11 PM You have created a beauty wrapped with tears of words coming out from your heart. Very nicely crafted poem dear friend. Sorry dear friend I missed your comment of May 19 on my Tribute on Mother's Day poem. With best wishes ...Ravindra K kapoor

Darlene De Beaulieu July 15, 2019 at 12:54 PM Hello Charlie Smith, this poem is so beautifully written. It reads as a prayer. have a nice day my friend.

Swetha Vangaveti May 15, 2019 at 12:08 AM "And thou wilt ever be with me." - these words are a revival of hope :)

Arturo Michael April 9, 2019 at 4:12 AM And that love is forever....Lovely... Charlie Smith April 13, 2019 at 6:12 AM Thank you Arturo...

Chuck Melugin March 27, 2019 at 8:30 AM Charlie you write your butt off! I hear a song here! Your pen drips gold as your heart orchestrates! Charlie Smith March 27, 2019 at 9:51 AM Thanks Chuck...

Robert Lindley March 3, 2019 at 4:42 PM Awesome verses as always your great pen bleeds! I especially loved the second stanza!!! A fav.. a superbly crafted creation my great friend. Charlie Smith March 4, 2019 at 11:59 AM Thank you Robert...

Harry Horsman February 10, 2019 at 4:40 PM One beautiful poem, Charlie, love it... Charlie Smith February 12, 2019 at 6:42 AM Thank you Harry.

Anne-Lise Andresen February 8, 2019 at 12:17 PM - A small ... but so rich poem ...... it's lovely, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Charlie Smith February 10, 2019 at 7:52 AM Thank you Anne-Lise...

Demetrios Trifiatis February 8, 2019 at 7:07 AM So tenderly romantic, even though a shed of sadness appears dear Charlie! Superb! Charlie Smith February 10, 2019 at 7:52 AM Thank you Demetrios,,,

Silent One February 7, 2019 at 5:42 AM What a sad poem Charlie, this one would have been perfect for my last contest, the last tear... Charlie Smith February 7, 2019 at 11:32 AM I missed the deadline, I suppose. Thanks SO...

Robert L. Hinshaw February 6, 2019 at 3:29 PM You said it so well in these lines, Charlie. Having lost my dear wife Vera of 66 years in July, these words are of great comfort to me and as I wrote in a recent poem about her passing "you'll ever be my wife through all eternity" - Bob Charlie Smith February 7, 2019 at 11:21 AM Sorry for your loss Bob, I wrote this for an old friend's wife who just lost her husband of 55 years. She seems to be just lost...

Vijay Pandit February 6, 2019 at 2:29 PM A heartfelt rendering..speaking to beloved..your poem brings tears. Excellent write, Charlie. Charlie Smith February 7, 2019 at 11:18 AM Thanks Vijay...

Valerie Staton February 6, 2019 at 2:29 PM What a beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Charlie Smith February 7, 2019 at 11:09 AM Thank you Valerie...

Heidi Sands February 6, 2019 at 1:49 PM Very well expressed Charlie! Charlie Smith February 7, 2019 at 11:09 AM Thank you Heidi...

Lin Lane February 6, 2019 at 1:36 PM This pains my heart. It's been quite some time since I've browsed these pages, but I'm glad my eyes saw your name, Charlie. I hope you're well. Charlie Smith February 7, 2019 at 11:08 AM Thank you Lin, it has been a while, all is well. How about You?...