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Forever Love

These lonely tears, cold as the night
I shed for sake of thee
Time may fade from black and white
But thou wilt ever be with me

As suns will set within my heart
Lord, spare the sorrow I may see
All this grief doth play its part
But thou wilt ever be with me

As I walk this unfamiliar lane
Inviting hope to set me free
It's but one love that stills the pain
And thou wilt ever be with me.

02/06/2019

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Ravindra K Kapoor Date: 9/13/2019 10:11:00 PM You have created a beauty wrapped with tears of words coming out from your heart. Very nicely crafted poem dear friend. Sorry dear friend I missed your comment of May 19 on my Tribute on Mother's Day poem. With best wishes ...Ravindra K kapoor Login to Reply

Darlene De Beaulieu Date: 7/15/2019 12:54:00 PM Hello Charlie Smith, this poem is so beautifully written. It reads as a prayer. have a nice day my friend. Login to Reply

Swetha Vangaveti Date: 5/15/2019 12:08:00 AM "And thou wilt ever be with me." - these words are a revival of hope :) Login to Reply

Arturo Michael Date: 4/9/2019 4:12:00 AM And that love is forever....Lovely... Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 4/13/2019 6:12:00 AM Thank you Arturo...

Chuck Melugin Date: 3/27/2019 8:30:00 AM Charlie you write your butt off! I hear a song here! Your pen drips gold as your heart orchestrates! Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 3/27/2019 9:51:00 AM Thanks Chuck...

Robert Lindley Date: 3/3/2019 4:42:00 PM Awesome verses as always your great pen bleeds! I especially loved the second stanza!!! A fav.. a superbly crafted creation my great friend. Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 3/4/2019 11:59:00 AM Thank you Robert...

Harry Horsman Date: 2/10/2019 4:40:00 PM One beautiful poem, Charlie, love it... Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 2/12/2019 6:42:00 AM Thank you Harry.

Anne-Lise Andresen Date: 2/8/2019 12:17:00 PM - A small ... but so rich poem ...... it's lovely, Charlie :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :) Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 2/10/2019 7:52:00 AM Thank you Anne-Lise...

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 2/8/2019 7:07:00 AM So tenderly romantic, even though a shed of sadness appears dear Charlie! Superb! Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 2/10/2019 7:52:00 AM Thank you Demetrios,,,

Silent One Date: 2/7/2019 5:42:00 AM What a sad poem Charlie, this one would have been perfect for my last contest, the last tear... Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 2/7/2019 11:32:00 AM I missed the deadline, I suppose. Thanks SO...

Robert L. Hinshaw Date: 2/6/2019 3:29:00 PM You said it so well in these lines, Charlie. Having lost my dear wife Vera of 66 years in July, these words are of great comfort to me and as I wrote in a recent poem about her passing "you'll ever be my wife through all eternity" - Bob Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 2/7/2019 11:21:00 AM Sorry for your loss Bob, I wrote this for an old friend's wife who just lost her husband of 55 years. She seems to be just lost...

Vijay Pandit Date: 2/6/2019 2:29:00 PM A heartfelt rendering..speaking to beloved..your poem brings tears. Excellent write, Charlie. Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 2/7/2019 11:18:00 AM Thanks Vijay...

Valerie Staton Date: 2/6/2019 2:29:00 PM What a beautiful poem. I really enjoyed reading it. Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 2/7/2019 11:09:00 AM Thank you Valerie...

Heidi Sands Date: 2/6/2019 1:49:00 PM Very well expressed Charlie! Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 2/7/2019 11:09:00 AM Thank you Heidi...

Lin Lane Date: 2/6/2019 1:36:00 PM This pains my heart. It's been quite some time since I've browsed these pages, but I'm glad my eyes saw your name, Charlie. I hope you're well. Login to Reply Charlie Smith Date: 2/7/2019 11:08:00 AM Thank you Lin, it has been a while, all is well. How about You?...