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One Fine Day

(The Japanese geisha Madam Butterfly had a brief romance with an American naval officer, whom she regards as her husband, and whom she expects will return to her. She is tragically mistaken.) Oh, are you crying, son? But why? It doesn't help to groan and grieve. The only thing is to believe. Believe with me, and watch the sky. One fine day I'll see his funnel, breaking the horizon's line. That day is going to be so fine! No more shadows, no more tunnels. So manly in his clean white suit, he'll steer towards my harbour wall, earnest, eager, ardent, tall, his cannon firing in salute. Is this him now? I saw him first! I won't go running down the hill: it's better to stay seemly, still, even though my breast could burst! The lotus bloom, true to beauty, must guard its dignity, serene. My fate, to wait with gentle mien, the passive, pliant geisha's duty. Mistaken, am I? So, so, so. Then we must steel ourselves, and wait. One day, framed in the bamboo gate, I'll see my husband. This I know. Just when it seems it cannot be, when crippled hope has left me weak, I'll hear the bamboo hinges creak - Lieutenant-San has come for me! "Can you guess who's here?" I'll cry, a-tremble as I smooth my hair, no more foreboding or despair. I'll run to greet him, nervous, shy. American, and tall and brave, he will call me "baby-wife", and, just like in the other life, I'll feel protected, nurtured, saved. "My Butterfly, my forest fern, my orange-blossom," he will say. This will happen, one fine day. You mark my words - he will return.

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Date: 2/27/2017 3:16:00 AM
It WAS heartbreaking, for I think it was very cruel. 'Take' a wife for the duration of your stay in Japoan only. It's written wth so much love and care, this poem. It's wonderful Michael. And that rhyme wonderful as ever.
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Michael Coy
Date: 2/27/2017 3:22:00 AM
Thank you very much, Darren. In the opera "Madam Butterfly", the American officer DOES return ... with his American wife. The sight of the American woman is all Butterfly needs in order to understand that she has been deluded.
Date: 2/26/2017 8:28:00 PM
Heartbreaking story there, Michael, yet often great beauty in the productions.
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Michael Coy
Date: 2/26/2017 11:33:00 PM
You must be tiring of my "thank yous", but they're sincerely offered.

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