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Lingering, we watch the quays Rambling by the old seaside, On brisk yet fluid August days While gazes caught waves on a ride; To mirror our bewitched displays Like sighs, whispered low the tide. Held by the light of moon’s flare Compelled to cite, expose a trance; You pinned a rose along my hair O destined sign for lush romance; And right then, you wished to declare One love’s debut, one fateful chance! 7/14/2015 Isaiah Zerbt's Contest Quartets

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Date: 8/4/2015 3:16:00 PM
I have never done well in Isaiah's contest, but I love his themes and the poems they inspire! Nette, yours is amazing and I truly enjoyed taking it in.. Congrats on your Win!
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Date: 7/30/2015 2:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Nette :)
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Date: 7/30/2015 1:25:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome passionate winning work nette! As amazing as ever!
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Date: 7/29/2015 2:20:00 PM
So romantic congrats on your win! ~lee
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Date: 7/18/2015 8:49:00 PM
Amazing write my friend. Sure to place well in that contest. A7
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Date: 7/16/2015 3:03:00 PM
Great imagery full of romance and rhyme, Nette. Goodluck! Go Pinay! hugss
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Date: 7/16/2015 8:05:00 AM
Nette, you paint a beautiful romantic scene.. Leaves me musing!
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Date: 7/15/2015 7:44:00 PM
Beautiful soft romance in your imagery. It should do well. Good luck!
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Date: 7/14/2015 5:47:00 AM
Reads like a winner..Way to go, Lady..I enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for the visits..Sara
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Date: 7/14/2015 1:16:00 AM
It was there all along, the love.Very lovely poem. You have a wide sea of words and expressions, and the skill to employ them effectively.
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Date: 7/13/2015 5:11:00 PM
Beautifully penned Nette I am struggling to finish mine in time:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/13/2015 5:02:00 PM
I think Isaiah will appreciate the subtleness of this piece. Lovely writing!
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Date: 7/13/2015 4:58:00 PM
A lovely and intrigue piece, good luck....A.M.
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