Nette Onclaud Poet Quatrain

One Fateful Chance

Lingering, we watch the quays
Rambling by the old seaside,
On brisk yet fluid August days
While gazes caught waves on a ride;
To mirror our bewitched displays
Like sighs, whispered low the tide.

Held by the light of moon’s flare
Compelled to cite, expose a trance;
You pinned a rose along my hair
O destined sign for lush romance;
And right then, you wished to declare
One love’s debut, one fateful chance!


7/14/2015
Isaiah Zerbt's Contest  Quartets

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Laura Leiser July 30, 2015 at 2:50 PM Congrats on your win, Nette :)

Dr. Upma A. Sharma July 30, 2015 at 1:25 AM Congrats on ur awesome passionate winning work nette! As amazing as ever!

Lee Carter July 29, 2015 at 2:20 PM So romantic congrats on your win! ~lee

Robert Lindley July 18, 2015 at 8:49 PM Amazing write my friend. Sure to place well in that contest. A7

Kp Nunez July 16, 2015 at 3:03 PM Great imagery full of romance and rhyme, Nette. Goodluck! Go Pinay! hugss

Jaycee Cervenka July 15, 2015 at 7:44 PM Beautiful soft romance in your imagery. It should do well. Good luck!

Sara Kendrick July 14, 2015 at 5:47 AM Reads like a winner..Way to go, Lady..I enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for the visits..Sara

Norma Arana July 14, 2015 at 1:16 AM It was there all along, the love.Very lovely poem. You have a wide sea of words and expressions, and the skill to employ them effectively.

Jan Allison July 13, 2015 at 5:11 PM Beautifully penned Nette I am struggling to finish mine in time:-) hugs Jan xx

Richard Lamoureux July 13, 2015 at 5:02 PM I think Isaiah will appreciate the subtleness of this piece. Lovely writing!

Afolabi Muideen July 13, 2015 at 4:58 PM A lovely and intrigue piece, good luck....A.M.