One Fateful Chance

Lingering, we watch the quays
Rambling by the old seaside,
On brisk yet fluid August days
While gazes caught waves on a ride;
To mirror our bewitched displays
Like sighs, whispered low the tide.

Held by the light of moon’s flare
Compelled to cite, expose a trance;
You pinned a rose along my hair
O destined sign for lush romance;
And right then, you wished to declare
One love’s debut, one fateful chance!


7/14/2015
Isaiah Zerbt's Contest  Quartets

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/30/2015 2:50:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Nette :)
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Date: 7/30/2015 1:25:00 AM
Congrats on ur awesome passionate winning work nette! As amazing as ever!
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Date: 7/29/2015 2:20:00 PM
So romantic congrats on your win! ~lee
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Date: 7/18/2015 8:49:00 PM
Amazing write my friend. Sure to place well in that contest. A7
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Date: 7/16/2015 3:03:00 PM
Great imagery full of romance and rhyme, Nette. Goodluck! Go Pinay! hugss
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Date: 7/15/2015 7:44:00 PM
Beautiful soft romance in your imagery. It should do well. Good luck!
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Date: 7/14/2015 5:47:00 AM
Reads like a winner..Way to go, Lady..I enjoyed reading your contest entry..Thanks for the visits..Sara
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Date: 7/14/2015 1:16:00 AM
It was there all along, the love.Very lovely poem. You have a wide sea of words and expressions, and the skill to employ them effectively.
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Date: 7/13/2015 5:11:00 PM
Beautifully penned Nette I am struggling to finish mine in time:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 7/13/2015 5:02:00 PM
I think Isaiah will appreciate the subtleness of this piece. Lovely writing!
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Date: 7/13/2015 4:58:00 PM
A lovely and intrigue piece, good luck....A.M.
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