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One day our love will end How sad that it is inescapable It’s written in the sky Parting is inevitable Excruciating the thought As I hold you in my arms We’ve been given this time That we must not squander A soulful romance to be treasured In every way and every second Because one day who knows All we’ll have are memories AP: Honorable Mention 2020 Posted on March 12, 2019

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Date: 3/13/2019 6:42:00 PM
Oh this is so true Line. Cherish each other for every moment you have together. Sadly all I have left are the memories now... so beautifully written Line, with kindest thoughts Ann xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/13/2019 7:32:00 PM
Thank you so much for your lovely visit and comment, Ann. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/12/2019 9:38:00 PM
hauntingly beautiful with a wonderfully endearing flow. This poem tips the balance of love and loss.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/12/2019 9:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, William, for your most appreciated visit and comment.
Date: 3/12/2019 9:15:00 PM
I am giving you a heartfelt sigh, Line. "A soulful romance to be treasured In every way and every second" Beautiful!
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/12/2019 9:38:00 PM
Thank you, Caren. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/12/2019 8:44:00 PM
Well written. True about our Earthly love. I believe that our spirits live on and true love will carry on thru eternity.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/12/2019 9:38:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely comment, Timothy. Most appreciated.
Date: 3/12/2019 8:39:00 PM
Sad but true, Line: Beautifully penned. Hugs, SuZ
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Line Gauthier
Date: 3/12/2019 9:39:00 PM
Thank you so much, SuZ. Most appreciated.

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