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One Bullet

I thought I’d go too far away with you Where our dream will be true But one bullet shatters the flower Which spreads the scent of love in the air I thought I’d win one day the throne of God Where our prayers are compiled a lot But one bullet stabs the hands of the praying Which embraces you as a true human being I thought I’d spend thousands of autumnal fair Where our unity will be a divine pair But one bullet incarnates the pair a corpse flood Which drives away the innocent fresh blood I thought the rose would be our commutable heart But the inhuman bullet makes it an imperialist dart © Mahtab Bangalee October 21, 2023 Chattogram

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Date: 10/28/2023 4:56:00 PM
I hope this isn't your personal experience, Mahtab. It was a well told story through poetry of the tragic relationship. Blessings my friend, Bill
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Date: 10/21/2023 10:38:00 PM
Desperately sad yet beautiful.
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