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One Broken Monoku

Breaking the monotony~sun melts into the horizon © Harry J Horsman 2014

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Line Gauthier

Date: 1/2/2018 2:25:00 PM

Lovely. Congrats on your win, Harry.

Probir Gupta

Date: 12/28/2017 4:23:00 AM

Beautifully poetic ... Congratulations ...

Eve Roper

Date: 12/27/2017 8:33:00 PM

beautiful, Harry, congratulations on your win! hugs eve

James Inman

Date: 12/27/2017 12:22:00 AM

The newness of every sunset, a beautiful analogy for life Harry.

Maureen Mcgreavy

Date: 12/26/2017 10:07:00 PM

Fantastic piece Harry! Congratulations on your win :) xomo

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/26/2017 9:27:00 PM

Congratulations for your very well deserved win, Harry. It was one of my favorites I had seen.

Susan Ashley

Date: 12/26/2017 7:24:00 PM

A superb Monoku Harry! Congratulations on your top placement with this great write. ~Susan

Judith S

Date: 12/26/2017 6:14:00 PM

Great monoku Harry! Congrats on your top win!

Paul Callus

Date: 12/26/2017 5:06:00 PM

This monoku has served you well, Harry! Once again a winner! Congratulations! // paul

Janice Canerdy

Date: 12/26/2017 3:56:00 PM

Congrats on your well-deserved win, Harry! Janice

Curtis Moorman

Date: 12/26/2017 3:45:00 PM

Congratulations, Harry! Glad to see this win for you!

Charlie Smith

Date: 12/26/2017 2:53:00 PM

Wonderful write Harry, congratulations...

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/26/2017 2:46:00 PM

- Wooow, Harry - Awesome beauty - Congratulations on your 1st place in the contest! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Silent One

Date: 12/26/2017 1:22:00 PM

This is great use of words, so much packed into one line.. Congratulations on your first place in the Monoku 1 contest Harry..

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 1/10/2015 3:48:00 AM

:)! beautiful imagery.. :)! thanks for dropping by on one of my poems.. :)! Happy weekend.. :)! olive eloisa.. :)!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 12/29/2014 4:45:00 PM

Way to go with this great winning work..Congrats..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/28/2014 8:59:00 AM

HARRY, CONGRATULATIONS ON YOUR WINNING POEM... interesting Broken Monoku.... Have a sweet day ~LINDA~

Mandy Tams The Golden Girl

Date: 12/28/2014 7:50:00 AM

A number one in everybodies eyes congratulations harry xx

Kayod5 Kayode

Date: 12/27/2014 9:21:00 PM

Congrats on the win Harry...huggs

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/27/2014 9:19:00 PM

this is amazing, love seeing it again with its deserved win. Congratulations, Harry.

Maurice Yvonne

Date: 12/27/2014 7:21:00 PM

Congratulations on your well deserved first place win Harry!

Jan Allison

Date: 12/27/2014 5:51:00 PM

Back to say many congrats on your win Harry:-) Hugs Jan xx

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 12/9/2014 1:29:00 PM

- Lovely written, Harry! - Luck in contest! - I wish you and your family a beautiful Christmas! - All the best to you :) - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

David Williams

Date: 12/9/2014 12:11:00 AM

Hello Harry it's been a while my friend since I was here but it was worth coming back to read this very visual write, have a very Peaceful Happy Christmas....

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 12/8/2014 12:35:00 PM

Superb! Good luck, dear Harry!