one breath

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Poetry/Open Verse/one breath
Copyright Protected, ID 05-1730-123-08
All Rights Reserved, 2025, Constance La France
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Written, May 08, 2025
For the International Contest, Your Choice D
Sponsor, Brian Strand< Judged 05/10/2025

Fifth Place

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sighing my flowers are wilting and thirsty water is needed a miracle lifted heads smiling so happy tell self don't forget your helpless garden flowers in the hot sun again

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/11/2025 10:13:00 AM

So sweet, Constance. Congrats in Brian's contest

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 5/9/2025 7:11:00 AM

Dear Constance, your gentle words show how easily we forget to tend what’s dearest-inside and out. I see Daisy’s loyal love and Forget-Me-Not’s true remembrance in your care. May your garden and heart both find cool relief, and never thirst too long for kindness. Spring Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Constance La France
Date: 5/10/2025 4:30:00 AM

Daniel, thank you for the nice comment and compliment, appreciate so much, blessings ~