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One Beat Left

by Michael J Falotico Two hearts ripped apart.. With just a one threaded string left.. Still only one beat.. writing from the past makes me appreciate today..

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Wilma Neels

Date: 6/14/2011 6:47:00 AM

A jewel of a senryu Michael, hope your week's been a good one, love Wilma

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/13/2011 4:53:00 PM

thankxx luv for your sweet and endearing comments of beautiful words on my poetry .. means so much to know u enjoy my lines .. as yours intoxicate me as well my W.K... your Jersey Girl in tipsy mode from the beauty of Michael's heart luv..

Nette Onclaud

Date: 6/13/2011 7:53:00 AM

today is what we only have, michael! a sentimental, emotive write! :) huggs, nette

Dinda Minardi

Date: 6/13/2011 7:20:00 AM

Aww... this is sadly wonderful..

Dr.Ram Mehta

Date: 6/12/2011 8:03:00 PM

beautiful and nice thought, Michael

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 6/12/2011 3:54:00 PM

exquisite emotion Michael projected in these lines of past reminiscent luv.. a new chapter brought happiness and joy today to enjoy as for me too.. your Jersey Girl so appreciate your sympathies to me for my loss of Bronco .. my baby meow boy.. thankxx my White Knight..forever luv..

Sara Kendrick

Date: 6/12/2011 11:22:00 AM

Sometimes what we learn from the past makes the present so much better in that we can appreciate where we are and where we are going...Glad that you saw the humor in my work about "The Nightmare"..Sara

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 6/12/2011 10:53:00 AM

That threaded string is like an umbilical cord that never completely goes away, Michael. I'm glad you've found happiness now. Wrote so many poems long ago about my husband after he died. Now I try to focus on the future. Blessings and love always to you, dear friend. If I could cross my toes, I would. That's part of the nerve damage problem. Lots of numbness and some pain as well. I'll let you know how things go after the MRI. Thanks for your good wishes, Carolyn

Kash Poet

Date: 6/12/2011 10:48:00 AM

Excellent Senryu here Michael.Enjoyed..Thanks for your ever inspiring words at my pages.

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 6/12/2011 10:42:00 AM

Thank you Michael, for your wonderful comment . And the very heart felt poem. That one last heart beat is the one that matters, It's the loudest heart beat of them all and the one that holds your hand close to your heart. Just to feel that one that hangs in there.. Thanks for sharing.. this wonderful thought,..p.d.

Kacey Greenlee

Date: 6/12/2011 10:19:00 AM

Well Michael,you are very much appreciated.Thank you for your warm thoughts on my''Heavenly Angels'' poem.You are a very unique writer.Big fan!....Kacey

Leo Larry Amadore

Date: 6/12/2011 9:26:00 AM

An interesting and well-conceived thought, competently presented.

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 6/12/2011 9:25:00 AM

what a very vivid write this is Michael! but I also actually like the hope you laced in here-- and thank you for your comments in my bloodstone poem-- happy to share that with you and thank you for taking enough interest to google it :D

Renee Kelly

Date: 6/12/2011 8:49:00 AM

This is lovely. And thanks for stopping by to read one of my haikus!