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One and Alone

It's grimly harsh to dwell alone As onward creeps the biting frost, That in a quiet of night’s chill A warm embrace is my heart’s need ... For with this season's change, I know, How love reveals its kindled flame To gently counter sorrows past, Enshrining moments long desired-- Yet all I feel is moonlight’s hush Where gardens lay their colors by. And though I catch a windy tune, It's grimly harsh to dwell alone. Contest of Brian Strand :New Year Standard Contest Re-posted 1/ 3/ 2018

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Date: 10/31/2016 9:47:00 PM
I came by to read this again! This just melts my heart!
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Date: 10/8/2016 10:25:00 PM
I am impressed. Congrats on your win. Love.
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Date: 10/5/2016 7:30:00 AM
Sadly beautiful Nette...congrats on your placement lovely lady :)-luloo
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Date: 10/4/2016 6:30:00 PM
Nette, this one sat on my heart after i read it. Thank you for dropping it into the contest.
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Date: 10/4/2016 7:28:00 AM
Breath taking! Your words sing here.
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Date: 9/30/2016 11:13:00 PM
You have captured the emotions and sentiments here beautifully, one of my favs!
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Date: 9/30/2016 11:06:00 PM
Lines 6 thru 8, I'm happy to say, I can testify are true - how I loved reading them, finding described what I have yet to define with words. And indeed 6 - 8 came only after the hell of being a lonely and depressed 'one' - something I'm sure I failed to get right. Poignant, touching write, Nette ... CayCay
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Date: 9/30/2016 8:34:00 PM
hey dearest net...thanks so much for the kind note..this is very good and very true..so sad to be one especially in this time of year...been missing you and soup too
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Date: 9/30/2016 2:21:00 PM
Being alone can be devastating. I find this pensive poem so unique and well-crafted. Bookmarking this ONE!
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Date: 9/30/2016 11:47:00 AM
Indeed, one is a lonely number. How outstanding is this poem in its poignant delivery!
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Date: 9/30/2016 6:47:00 AM
A nice write ... The warmth is the meaning of life ...
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