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Once upon perdition :re-edited:

The apostate looked out his window, and started to believe As genuflecting pylons sent ramifications through the trees Chaos questioned reason, hoping for a guilty plea but the world was too far gone, so began the killing spree The Crier rang his leper bell: “Our town’s a godless apparition” Filling hearts with envy of a once-dreaded condition Now the King prayed for calm, in a pagan act of contrition After his son died at birth, he had proscribed all religion Atheists came from all around, excommunication filled the air Roots faced horizontal, trying to feed off despair Anxious to leave town, fallen gargoyles block civic square Steeplejacks grow disoriented, from looking up at disrepair “That hole’s not deep enough,” winked the jester to the knave He could never resist a shortcut, even digging his own grave As the madness continued, hermits set fire each other’s caves Shedding light on the void, by burning alive its willing slaves With the apocalypse gathering pace, populations slowly died Some genius came forward a real madman in disguise Said, “We need a scapegoat— a martyr, an ultimate sacrifice” He was crucified for being too clever; they much preferred no advice And whilst writing this story, that apparently makes no sense the queen was in her chambers, hanging herself from suspense Children butcher themselves gaily, having learned how to fence As for putting fear of God in us, the wicked come crawling to repent At last when heaven reopened, an eclipse tried darken that day Never to see man overcast again, Sun went nova, boiling all life away… By David Kavanagh

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Date: 7/22/2025 4:11:00 PM
Now this is a poem of substance. You have opened the stained glass windows to reveal the horror behind...all of our own making. Such imaginative portrayals of the hells we have created, suffer in and blame some other entity for being the cause. Trust free will to contaminate the petri dish of the Grand Creator. Visionary writing David...hoping some fragments survive the nova.
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Date: 7/22/2025 1:19:00 PM
My gosh, David. It's woe after woe of life in the darkness. I'm not sure who's most diabolical, the jester or the knave. A grave meant for the both of them might be a good idea. I liked these lines most... "...Roots faced horizontal, trying to feed off despair." Not sure why my mind recalled the title, 'Raisin in the Sun,' after your last lines.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/22/2025 2:40:00 PM
Amen!
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/22/2025 2:24:00 PM
;-) lets not imagine we want to find out the answer to that. There are too many brainwashed bots around in human bodies.
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/22/2025 2:01:00 PM
What would any of us be without our imaginations Lin, probably brainwashed AI bots, Aubade indeed :)
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Lin Lane
Date: 7/22/2025 1:57:00 PM
I find no fault with your imagination, David. It's what dreams are carved from... good aubade ;-)
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/22/2025 1:51:00 PM
Thanks so much for commenting on this difficult piece Lin, I guess the poem lives up to its title, and a downward spiral ensues all the way from there, the original version I wrote some years ago, but it needed a little revamp to coincide with the world of madness that never really goes away, the jester and knave probably ended up down the same hole, maybe they all did, but makes no difference once I decided to blow up the sun, sorry about that! but I did blow up the whole universe before in one of my poems, so maybe I’m improving lol! Cheers David
Date: 7/22/2025 11:11:00 AM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful write/story. No fear with God... I have been off the computer for a few days and now way behind. Have a blessed day writing away..............
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David Kavanagh
Date: 7/22/2025 11:57:00 AM
Heya Paula, thanks for commenting on this piece, it’s quite some story, with a lot of truth about mankind’s nature, I’m pretty sure people have more to fear from other people than a man made apocalyptic God! No harm being off the computer for a few days, and catching up at your own leisure, cheers David

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