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Once Upon a Time

This is a poem about the future I'd love to have with the boy of my dreams. None of this has actually happened yet (besides us falling in love with eachother) but it's how I would like it to happen. Once upon a time, I became the luckiest girl in the world. I fell in love with a gorgeous boy with blue eyes, and he actually loved me back. He was like my prince, he treated me like his princess and would do anything for me. Today, we're united as King and Queen. It's been years, but walking down the aisle I'm still staring at the cutest, most perfect guy I've ever seen. When our lips finally meet after parting to say "I do", it tastes like Heaven. Once upon a time, I married a gorgeous boy with blue eyes. And today, I saw those perfect blue eyes light up when he first held our little girl in his arms. She's got her Daddy's blue eyes and just a little bit of her Momma's brown hair. She's going to be spoiled and loved more than possible. She'll know we support her no matter what, and she can tell us everything. It will be perfect. Once upon a time, one set of blue eyes became two, and we were made into a family. Now, that second pair of blue eyes is walking out the door to college, with a suitcase in one hand and a boy's hand in the other. He better love her and treat her just as well as her Daddy does. Once upon a time, I fell in love with a gorgeous boy with blue eyes. His hair has dulled and grayed but his eyes are the same, and they've seen a lifetime's worth of happiness and love. My baby had babies with the boy she walked out the door with, and I can tell she loves them as much as we loved her. Now it's her time to live.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2013




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Date: 3/17/2014 4:54:00 PM
Hi Megan, stopping by again, Congratulations, I'm scoping and enjoying the new featured poems for this week. :) It was nice to see your poem on the poetry soups, home page. Have a fun week. Always & Forever *LINDA
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Date: 3/17/2014 5:50:00 AM
A well penned poem, enjoyed it. Congrats on the poem being featured this week, megan
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Date: 6/12/2013 6:03:00 PM
This is a well expressed dream. I hope it is only one of many that you hold in your heart. You can achieve all that you dream. Don't be afraid to dream big and beautiful dreams.
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Date: 4/19/2013 6:28:00 PM
Dreams make up hope and effort with belief bring reality good luck and thank u for sharing this piece ;) edward
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Date: 4/18/2013 1:58:00 PM
Hi Megan. Welcome to the soup. This can be as true as you make it....good luck to you.
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Date: 4/18/2013 1:09:00 PM
Thank you for your well written poem Megan. - Welcome to P-Soup! - Have fun with writing, reading and comments with us. - Good luck! - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 4/17/2013 10:32:00 PM
Thank you everyone (: And I do have my blue-eyed man already, he's perfect and I really hope this is something like what our future turns out to be
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Date: 4/17/2013 10:00:00 PM
I am impressed on how well you shared every girls dream. The perfect guy almost like a prince. A dream, of the perfect family with a family of it's own. Soon you will meet a guy who will fit this fairytale like poem. and the time of living will be a fairy tale come true. xox~ PD
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Date: 4/17/2013 9:56:00 PM
Hi Megan, welcome to the poetry soup. It is very sweet to meet the daughter of a new friend. Colleen, your mom has been an inspiration towards a few things I shared with her. I also have a daughter on the soup. And a silly sister, who already beat me to your poem. I hope you enjoy the poets here. my name is Linda poets call me PD for fun... I'll be back after reading your poem..... always & forever * LINDA
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Date: 4/17/2013 9:08:00 PM
What a dream! I 've seen this kind of dream hundred times, but yet i am living alone. But wish u success, u may get ur blue eyed man.
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Date: 4/17/2013 8:40:00 PM
Hello Megan :-), Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT
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Date: 4/17/2013 8:22:00 PM
welcome to the soup Megan.follow your dreams and never let anything stop you from what you want.excellent job.I love you. LOVE MOM
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Date: 4/17/2013 6:16:00 PM
Welcome to PSoup. I am touched by your dream. I have lived that dream with my princess for 58 years. Good times have always outnumbered bad times. I wish you happiness and a good pen to record it with.... Write on, sweetheart... write on..... Jake
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