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Once upon a time, I was created by an 18th century jeweler, but I do not remember his name because of course I am very old; for a while, I lay on a satin cushion in a high style store, although just made of glass and silver, I was still quite expensive. Then, one bright day a nice gentlemen came in to buy a gift, he explained to the clerk it was a birthday present for his new wife; he was shown many pieces until they came to me, and he exclaimed, oh yes, this is perfect, I will take it, please. His wife adored me, oh I love the flowers in sparkling glass, of pink like diamonds, I am going to put it on my new hat; and there I stayed for years and years 'till she at last died, I lay on a closet shelve gathering dust until her daughter found me. She cleaned me gently and pinned me to her wool jacket, and I got tons of compliments when we went out shopping together; she never forgot me and touched me often with great love, then, she died suddenly- and I was given to a charity store. It was a terrible place, and I just lingered there 'cause I was old, until a girl with raven hair picked me up and said, oh how pretty; she took me home, cleaned me up until I sparkled again, and often she takes me out, saying I am too pretty to stay home. __________________________ April 13, 2018 Poetry/Personification/Once Upon A Time Copyright Protected, ID 18-1088-496-01 All Rights Reserved. Written under Pseudonym. Submitted to Standard Contest, 140 sponsor, Brian Strand First Place

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Date: 12/3/2018 8:45:00 AM
Eve, thank you for visiting my poem with comment and congratulations. Something does not have to be perfect to be loved, anyways that is how I feel about old things~
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Date: 12/2/2018 7:38:00 PM
Dear Heart, this is a wonderful well written poem, beautiful broch even with the missing stones. Congratulations on your 1st place win.
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Date: 12/3/2018 8:44:00 AM
Smiling ~
Date: 11/28/2018 9:30:00 AM
Chris thank you for visiting and for the comment, appreciate ~
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Date: 11/26/2018 10:36:00 AM
What a wonderful poetic story. Like this piece of jewelry, we also get old and are sometimes put in places that we don't like, but if someone comes along and finds us beautiful, that can make all of this difference in the world. I loved this, the perspective of the brooch and how it definitely relates to many things.
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Date: 11/28/2018 8:58:00 AM
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Date: 11/25/2018 9:40:00 PM
Thanks Sand, Andrea and Victor for visiting my poem and leaving a comment, appreciate ~
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Date: 11/24/2018 6:25:00 PM
I love this idea of personifying a beautiful piece of jewelry like this lovely pin. That picture inspired such a gorgeous poem in you!!
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Date: 11/28/2018 8:59:00 AM
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Date: 11/24/2018 11:18:00 AM
your heart is showing : )
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Date: 11/28/2018 9:00:00 AM
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Date: 11/24/2018 11:17:00 AM
Hi Tom, thanks for visiting my poem and commenting, I love old jewelry,(cannot afford antique jewelry) but I am always on the search for something old, bringing it home and making it sparkle again, and I wear it, it is not just decoration on my dresser ~
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Date: 11/24/2018 10:39:00 AM
Jewellery can lose it's sparkle but a bit of tender love and care can make it sparkle again. Well written Dear Heart. Tom.
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Date: 11/28/2018 9:00:00 AM
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