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Once upon a time, I was h... | Quotes & Writings by Devahuti ...

I used to be a happy girl, who smiled all the time; I like to jump and twirl, and up trees I would climb. When I was a bit older, death came into my life; as I wept on Mom's shoulder, my soul stabbed with a knife. Once, laughter was the music in my soul, once, my glass of life was full to the rim; once, no storms shook the ocean of my sleep, once, my heart was not broken into pieces; once, I was happy and knew who I was. When I was all grown up, I met the man of my dreams; we went for a date in his pickup, he liked fishing in woodland streams. Soon a baby was on the way, but again death came to visit and take; and baby in this world could not stay, then, when my love died I was heartbreak. Once, laughter was the music in my soul, once, my glass of life was full to the rim; once, no storms shook the ocean of my sleep, once, my heart was not broken into pieces; once, I was happy and knew who I was. So many I loved are now lost, and even my own self of me is gone; for death- I have paid a huge cost, and the essence of me has withdrawn. Once, my heart was not broken into pieces, once, I was happy and knew who I was; Once, I was me. ______________________________ August 21, 2020 Poetry/Lyric/Once Copyright Protected, ID 20-1280-290-03 All Rights Reserved, 2020, Constance La France Written for the contest, Pick-A-Title, Vol 22 - Lyric 2 sponsor, Edward Ibeh, Theme chosen #1 Once Second Place

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Date: 9/25/2020 12:59:00 PM
- A touching and beautiful poem, Constance :) - Congratulations on your great win :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 9/28/2020 8:52:00 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you for the compliment and the congratulations _Constance
Date: 9/24/2020 2:49:00 PM
No one does dark, morose poetry better than you do, Constance:-) I get the feeling it's some sort of cathartic exercise for you. Very powerful and moving. Congratulations on your win in my contest!
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Date: 9/28/2020 8:55:00 AM
Edward, thanks for another great contest and for my placement, it is true I do write mostly dark poetry, it seems to be my thing, I have no problem reaching into my soul for that certain emotion a poem needs and setting it free _Constance
Date: 9/2/2020 4:53:00 PM
Wow Sis! Great Job!
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Date: 9/28/2020 8:55:00 AM
Bobby, thanks so much for the visit _Constance
Date: 8/22/2020 11:26:00 AM
This is heartfelt, poignant, and true to what poetry can do for others - it can show that we do survive even the worst of things, and we do retain ourselves in the end. Well penned, Constance. Bravo.
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Date: 8/26/2020 9:58:00 AM
Caren, thanks for visiting my poem and for the great comment _Constance
Date: 8/21/2020 2:24:00 PM
I have read your much cherised life led, Constance, 'tis poignant-filled, verily your commentary finds you to be blessed with the breath of life being a beautifully well-kept poetess, Aloha! William
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Date: 8/26/2020 9:58:00 AM
William, thank you so much for that beautiful comment _Constance
Date: 8/21/2020 1:05:00 PM
Friends, this poem is just a poem, yes I have been followed by death every step of the way in my life but somehow though lost and forlorn many a time, I have risen above it, so do not worry about me I found me and life is good _Constance
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