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Once.

I once walked a mile in worn shoes I onced fell to my knees as others flew I once cried a silent tear I once was one to fear I once wanted to give in I once found God in my sins I once rose from the ash I once was...and still am.

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Date: 10/2/2008 8:58:00 PM
Michael - this is a really cool poem that I liked a lot - Loved the repeating beginning in fact this is a specific form if you would have kept it "I once" all the way through that is called Anaphora - Any how the content was great - God Bless
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