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Once..... Our Sweet Dream (Part 2)

Welcome to my Kingdom,Handsome Pirate Of the Seas! I'm just a little Mermaid,have no feet, nor even knees.. Yet i have a Heartbeat,Waitin for a Human's Love, a Kiss of love ,transform me,in a lady On Your lands above. Welcome to my Kingdom ,Handsome Pirate Of the Seas, Your chocolate Brown eyes sparkling,Will You show me what love means? I'm so joyful!Even Happy,Your Ship sunked in my deep blue! In my tender of my weakest,i have a soft spot just for You! Welcome to my kingdom,Handsome Pirate of the Seas, Sing to me, On this velvet evening,songs of Sweetest Melodies. Let Us ,travel UnderWater,I have treasures just for You, Here are Mermaids in Dark colors,Bronzed Brunettes,and Blondies too! They can teach you Coral Dancing,On your lap,all over you! In their Caves,they give you pleasure!as they lullaby with you. They give you their Gold treasures,Precious Stones and Diamonds too, Yet all that i can offer,is a Pearl,for whom will love me true. You can leave me,Go and party,through the night ,Under Rocked waves, Or else,leave all behind,as You join me in my magic secret place. Handsome Pirate,i can't give You all their Diamonds and their Gold, all i can ever give you,is my Loyal Heart to hold.. Handsome Pirate,i can give you, Just a Pearl i've never sold, this Pearl is pale and fragile,with a tale still to be told.. Welcome to my Kingdom Handsome Pirate of the Seas, I'm just a little Mermaid,have no feet ,Nor even knees... Handsome Pirate, i am leaving!If You want Me ,Call my name! i come forward in an instance ,Hearing what you've gotta say Welcome to my Kingdom,Handsome Pirate Of the Seas, Hold on to my Silver tail,as We swim in Our Sweet Dreams (to be cont..) (Inspired and Helped by jOlly Roger :)Charma

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Date: 11/5/2009 2:40:00 PM
I pretty much closed my eyes and let my finger land on my computer screen. The poem of yours that it landed on was "Once..... Our Sweet Dream." I read it once, I read it twice and both times I was blown away. I also wanted to thank you for your comments on my work that you so graciously sent my way. Best Wishes Always Charma. Bill
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Date: 10/31/2009 4:10:00 PM
Dear Charmaine, Quite elaborate POETRY AS I read YOUR Tanka I thought she is cowritting this with Jolly I'm and old man It wasn't until I read This exquisite POEM that I met Jolly Roger Very clever POETRY Thank-YOU for YOUR Gracious Comments on my work they are muchly appreciated LOVE ALWAYS...HG
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Date: 10/23/2009 6:06:00 PM
A cute poem, fun to read. But you got to watch out on those pirates, you know, they can steal your heart and leave bleeding. Thanks for sharing you poetry. Caroline.
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Date: 10/23/2009 11:17:00 AM
Oooo, who can this Handsome Pirate of the sea's be? Oh ny, this lovely poem is turning into a series, mmmm >> James
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Date: 10/22/2009 7:35:00 PM
nicely penned
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Date: 10/22/2009 6:44:00 PM
I really like this...Enjoyed reading...Thanks for all your nice comments...Marty
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Date: 10/22/2009 2:47:00 PM
great start . very creative and inspiring my little mermaid. but next time be a little less trusting and a little less testing. jhl
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Date: 10/22/2009 2:23:00 PM
Charma, who won't be the pirate!!! Really enjouyed your light poetry. Thank you for your nice comment. Sorry to say that I am very busy with packing to move and have no time to write another poem, but surely will do once I have the time for it. Gert
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