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If I but had the basic raw nerve and wit I would show a few folks how to do it: “Write a line or two with good rhythm and rhyme” On Poetry Soup, however, that would be a crime! We have some folks who write marvelous gibberish If I may say, but, of course, I’m being somewhat devilish; On the other hand, I have tried to understand their verse Reading them frequently, they’ve gotten worse and worse! Interestingly, they are convinced they write like William Shakespeare, But truth is, nothing about their poorly-written, so-called, poetry is clear, Misspellings, poor syntax, and lack of a discernible theme Well, now, they make me throw up my hands and scream! May I suggest, if you are remotely caring, get up to speed Please, take time to read some great master poets, indeed! This is a poetry site, or so I have been led to believe And, with effort, writing good lines is easy to achieve. Tossing random words onto a page willy-nilly And calling it poetry, is simply plain silly!
Written December 27, 2021 60th on Poetry Soup's BEST NEW POEMS LIST January 26, 2022

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Date: 1/8/2022 12:34:00 PM
Hi. It has to be said that much of what appears on poetrysoup is, to say the least, somewhat lacking. But many of these poems are from folk wanting to learn the skills - whether free verse rhyming verse or whatever. Maybe, if they receive some positive comments they will feel good and want to go to continue their apprenticeship. These students need encouraging. Some may stay with it and some may dump it. But let's give 'em all a chance. Best wishes. Tony
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/12/2022 10:08:00 AM
You are absolutely right, Tony, we need to encourage those in their apprenticeship who show promise.
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Date: 1/11/2022 4:17:00 PM
Hi Tony - Thanks for your thoughts. This was really meant to be a humorous poem, and I hope it was. Perhaps a bit sarcastic, but worth writing. Thanks for your read.
Date: 1/5/2022 6:12:00 PM
pure poetic genius Milton, the ending sure made me lol:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 1/11/2022 4:18:00 PM
Not sure about that, Jan, but I did enjoy expressing my thoughts on the subject with a humorous twist.
Date: 1/4/2022 9:59:00 AM
And we are here to grow and learn, as well as share; perhaps we should engage in more mentoring? Well penned.
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Date: 1/11/2022 4:18:00 PM
Absolutely. I agree with you wholeheartedly, M. L. Thanks.
Date: 12/29/2021 7:25:00 AM
‘Ere, guvnor, you ain’t better not be incinerating that I ain’t not writing’ proper like what that Billy boy Shakeyspear used to when he did. You can’t cast no nasturtiums at us poetry writing poetic people what write poetry. If I had a quid for every time somebody said I was a good poetic poet person I’d have two quid. So knock it on the head, Mush… or I’m gonna challenge you to a poetry jewel. Then you’ll be for it. Terry ;-)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/6/2022 6:53:00 PM
Still LMAO!
Date: 12/29/2021 3:37:00 AM
I read. I shake my head. I wonder... doesn't anyone bother reading what they are going to present before posting? In many cases it's clear the answer is 'no.' Editing takes so little time, so why not do it to make sure there are no typos, misspellings, etc? I cringe when the poem's title is incorrectly spelled. You allude to one who has become impossible to read without the editor in me wanting to reach for a red pen, but it's not worth the effort.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 1/11/2022 4:18:00 PM
Thanks, Lin. I really do appreciate your comments on the poem.
Date: 12/28/2021 2:29:00 PM
Thank you for sharing your thoughts on poetry and it presentation my friend. Write on ! Bill
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/28/2021 4:28:00 PM
Same to you, Bill. You are a very, very fine poet. Never stop writing and sharing.
Date: 12/28/2021 9:15:00 AM
We are all aspiring poets, the longer we write the more we evolve, hopefully. Waiting on the day...Delice
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/28/2021 12:38:00 PM
Oh my dear Delice, you have certainly arrived!!! I enjoy your poems tremendously.
Date: 12/28/2021 7:35:00 AM
I love the last two lines, especially; well said and written. But now I must go sorry to say; I'm off in a flash, to check if my works need a comma, colon, or em-dash!
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Date: 12/28/2021 7:57:00 AM
LOL. Terry, you are simply a joy to read! Frankly, my punctuation in poetry is terrible, so I ought to practice what I preach!
Date: 12/28/2021 7:30:00 AM
Hi Milton, You just left a beautiful, encouraging comment on my page - Hope I am not dong this "Tossing random words onto a page willy-nilly And calling it poetry, is simply plain silly!" Ha ha ha! My daughter gave me a collection of classic poetry as a Christmas gift. Going to read a lot of good poetry. Your Couplet is perfect, Dear Friend. Thank you for reading my poems - truly appreciate. Your comment almost made me cry with happiness. Best wishes for a blessed New Year ~ Mala
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Date: 12/28/2021 7:57:00 AM
Ah, Mala, you are one of those master poets everyone ought to be reading! Thanks for your warm and thoughtful response to my poem.
Date: 12/28/2021 3:49:00 AM
Hahaha Hank, for a long time I was just typing up short stories HOPING it was poetry, but the poets on this site were encouraging and patient with me and some still are - you for example, and I appreciate it.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/28/2021 7:56:00 AM
Caren, you are a master poet...and you know it! I enjoy what you write, or I wouldn't keep reading it!
Date: 12/27/2021 11:11:00 PM
Your devilish, sarcastic point taken, Milt!... lol ... I love the last two lines... Please remember some never learn!
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Date: 12/28/2021 7:56:00 AM
I suppose that IS true, Marilene, but I hate to think that.
Date: 12/27/2021 7:09:00 PM
Here with you on this one...
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/27/2021 7:43:00 PM
Well, thanks, Neil. I hope you read all of my comments below.
Date: 12/27/2021 6:27:00 PM
i ain't got no idear wut in tarnation you be talkin' about, mister. this hear cite be open to evrywon. doan like it? tuff tootsies.
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Date: 12/27/2021 6:46:00 PM
Hey, gw, you're supposed to get a ground covering of snow this weekend, according to our weather forecast. Get out your skis! Oh, sorry, Chicago...ice skates.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/27/2021 6:45:00 PM
LMAO, gw. You got that right! I could give you a list, if you'd like. That's why I told everyone last week (when you were missing) that I was no longer going to read every new poem every day! Just too much gar-bage! Yes! And, no Jabberwockies! (See John's comment)
Date: 12/27/2021 5:30:00 PM
I believe the gold standard for poetic gibberish was awarded to the poem Jabberwocky for its nonsensical brilliance.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/27/2021 6:20:00 PM
Hey, John, I'd be thrilled to pieces if some of these folks could write a "Jabberwocky," to be quite honest. I hope you realize this is sarcasm and is meant to be funny. But, remember, sarcasm always has the "ring of truth!" Thanks, John.
Date: 12/27/2021 5:28:00 PM
This is a beauty Milton!! Cheers…..Debxx
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/27/2021 6:20:00 PM
Thank you, Deb M. I truly appreciate your cheers!
Date: 12/27/2021 3:37:00 PM
This is hilarious, I'm shaking reading this lol. I just hope that someone will have the decency to tell me if I ever get to the stage where I write gibberish, then I'll be gone in a flash. Tom (still shaking)
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/27/2021 6:22:00 PM
Bless your heart, Tom, you got it! I was writing sarcasm, and it was supposed to be funny. Thank goodness, you got it! In a million years, I agree with you. If I find myself writing gibberish, I'm out of here...quicker than a flash!
Date: 12/27/2021 1:45:00 PM
I like that word willy-nilly which was used in the poem " Brown's Decent" written by Robert Frost. He had a good sense of humor didn't he. I enjoyed reading this one. Since I have had COVID my brain is not functioning at the level it was before. I hope that soon it will get back up to speed. Thanks for the visit to my blog. Wayne is getting better or so we think. He is up and about but still having some pain but not like it was when he went to the ER. Sara
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 12/27/2021 2:05:00 PM
Thank you so much for your thoughtful, positive response to my poem (which was supposed to have a note of humor). I certainly hope both you and Wayne have a better New Year! Best wishes!

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