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On Wings of Freedom

"on wings of freedom" on wings of freedom ride with me once more we'll travel under the sun and light we'll breathe clean fresh air more than this together we'll be to make one understand is fully difficult for until I'm seen I will never be known known to us both as a soul of freedom a strength of power and gentle as a child brush me saddle me and get me prepared unity of horse and rider nothing compares SkyWatcher 03-26-22 written in the voice of a horse

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Date: 8/16/2022 7:13:00 PM
Horse riding!
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 8/17/2022 11:18:00 AM
Thank you very much Miranda. I hope you enjoyed the entry. I miss my riding days.
Date: 4/21/2022 9:56:00 AM
Lisa, amazing poem, I love horses too, there is something so magical about them, I like how your poem is in the voice of the horse ~Constance
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/22/2022 8:16:00 AM
Hello Constance - Hi. I love horses and miss my riding days thus your beautiful and generous review and commentary make me smile. Truly. Yes, horses are magical at that. Thank you also Constance for mentioning that I wrote in the voice of the horse. I appreciate your comment on that aspect. Have a wonderful day. Keep enjoying poetrysoup and I look forward to returning to your page soon. Stay well.
Date: 4/17/2022 8:58:00 AM
unity of horse and rider... so true... This was fun to read, and well done. Ann
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/22/2022 8:13:00 AM
Hello Ann - Hi. Thank you very much. I'm so sorry for this late response to a most generous and gracious review. I love horses and the bond of horse and rider is special. Thank you for seeing this particular entry. Have a wonderful day. Keep enjoying poetrysoup.
Date: 4/6/2022 4:09:00 PM
You must have a love for animals, especially horses, Lisa. Lovely horse poem. I enjoyed the read. Hugs, Bill
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 4/11/2022 10:59:00 AM
Thank you for the smile once again Bill. Hi. Yes, I love horses and miss my riding days. They're such beautiful animals and souls. I'm glad you enjoyed the entry. Truly. Have a wonderful night and I will see you very soon on your page. Blessings
Date: 3/26/2022 4:48:00 PM
An amazing ride Lisa, the unbreakable bond between horse and rider captured well in your verse. Tom
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/27/2022 3:16:00 AM
Good Morning Tom - Hi. Thank you Thank you for saying the bond is captured because there truly is a bond. Horses are amazing. As always I thank you for your commentary and visits. Have a wonderful day. Blessings
Date: 3/26/2022 2:46:00 PM
Lovely pen Lisa, interesting take coming from the voice of the horse. Take care, Gordon
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/27/2022 3:14:00 AM
Good Morning Gordon - Thank you ever so much for your gracious review and intake on the entry. Yes, horses have voices (smile). They truly are amazing in every way. Have a wonderful day. Keep enjoying poetrysoup. Take care.
Date: 3/26/2022 11:25:00 AM
known to us both as a soul of freedom a strength of power and gentle as a child. Ricci your writing is really brilliant. With each verse, you express a strong message in a poetically wonderful way. I really like this poem! Blessings
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/27/2022 3:10:00 AM
Good Morning Scotto - Blessings back to you that you for that and for your generous review and commentary to which I never take for granted. I am honored by your commentary. Horses are amazing in every way. Thank you again. Have a wonderful day. I look forward to turning to your page shortly.
Date: 3/26/2022 10:49:00 AM
Truly beautiful, Lisa. I have never tried Light Verse! It’s awesome. The line I liked best was “a strength of power and gentle as a child.” Like that, so much. Horses are awesome. I saw many when I was on vacation in Arizona. Gorgeous animals. FAV poem. Pangie xx
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Lisa Ricci
Date: 3/27/2022 3:12:00 AM
Good Morning Miss Pangie - Hi. Thank you so much for showcasing my words and line because horses truly are just that (smile). I no longer ride and I miss my riding days but I will always have the memories. Have a great day and I will see you shortly on your page. Remain well. Blessings...

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