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On the Wings of Spring

Bird songs float on the breeze As dawn's light hit the trees The sky has hues of gold As a new day takes hold Spring at long last is here! With all her blooms so fair Such sweet scents she will shed With blush of pink and red All those cold days are gone A soft breeze warms the dawn No more snow, sleet, or ice The days are clear and nice Look how the bee does dance As buds take a new stance The joy of all things new The rose is cooled by dew There's a song in my heart Which spring brings from the start Spring gives me wings to fly To reach up to the sky! -- 2-7-2018

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Date: 3/4/2018 2:18:00 PM
Hello Joseph, Spring is the beginning of renewal.All the greenery will return. Along with flowers and fruit. have a nice day my friend.
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Date: 2/26/2018 11:31:00 AM
Spring briefly came early for a moment as the beautiful imagery you depicted here danced across my mind... beautiful write... congrats on your win
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Date: 2/15/2018 7:32:00 PM
Inspiring one for spring, Joseph, and spring IS well on her way!! Hurrah!
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Date: 2/15/2018 7:32:00 PM
Oh and I see congrats are in order as well!! which contest was this in?
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Date: 2/12/2018 9:59:00 AM
Congratulations Joseph on your win! Beautiful imagery and such an uplifting subject! Spring is my favorite time of year. ~Judy
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Date: 2/11/2018 8:46:00 PM
Congratulations on your winning write, Joseph, fantastic write.. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/11/2018 8:40:00 PM
Joseph, lovely rhythm and rhymes, along with your sweet spring imagery, moved me with ease through your wonderfully poetic lines. Congratulations on your well deserved first place win. Warmest wishes. ~Susan
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Date: 2/11/2018 11:00:00 AM
If only it were true, spring that is, congratulations Joseph...
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Date: 2/11/2018 2:27:00 AM
So lovely! Congratulations on first place. I need to look for the contest list. ; )
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Date: 2/10/2018 3:27:00 PM
So very peaceful. This is beautiful Joseph :)
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Joseph May
Date: 2/10/2018 8:56:00 PM
Thank you
Date: 2/10/2018 10:38:00 AM
That's a cracker Joseph, congratulation on your joint 1st place... Mick
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Joseph May
Date: 2/10/2018 8:55:00 PM
Thanks Mick
Date: 2/10/2018 9:36:00 AM
Congrats on your win, Joseph. Well done.
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Joseph May
Date: 2/10/2018 8:55:00 PM
Thank you Line
Date: 2/10/2018 9:07:00 AM
Hi Joseph, I'm just coming back to say congratulations on your first place win.It was well deserved:-) Alexis
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Joseph May
Date: 2/10/2018 8:54:00 PM
Thank you alexis
Date: 2/10/2018 8:52:00 AM
Lovely imagery and lovely poem.. congratualtions on your first place Joseph..
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Joseph May
Date: 2/10/2018 8:54:00 PM
Thank you for my placement Silent One
Date: 2/8/2018 3:14:00 PM
Many of the one syllable words I researched lent themselves so well to two topics: romance and nature, particularly the spring. So you did a great job in discussing it as spring themed!
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Joseph May
Date: 2/8/2018 4:53:00 PM
Thank you Andrea..I have seen some very nice romantic ones...
Date: 2/7/2018 1:14:00 PM
- Wish to fly on spring wings ... but King Winter is here ... and the wings are stiff of frost - A lovely poem, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Joseph May
Date: 2/8/2018 4:51:00 PM
Thank you Anne
Date: 2/7/2018 10:36:00 AM
I love this. A pleasant poem that I needed to read today . A favorite. Very nice Joseph :)
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Joseph May
Date: 2/8/2018 4:51:00 PM
Thank you Heidi
Date: 2/7/2018 9:14:00 AM
With 10cm+ of snow on the way today I needed to read this. Thank you ;)
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Joseph May
Date: 2/8/2018 4:51:00 PM
Thank you Mo
Date: 2/7/2018 7:27:00 AM
Hi Joseph, You did a good job with the 120 words. Good content, imagery and rhymes. I too look forward to the Spring season for it is my favorite season of the year. I wish you the best of luck in the contest :-) Alexis
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Joseph May
Date: 2/7/2018 8:02:00 AM
Thank you Alexis
Date: 2/7/2018 6:54:00 AM
Lovely rhymes and scenic imagery..well written Joseph..a winning poem.
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Joseph May
Date: 2/7/2018 7:22:00 AM
Thank you Vijay

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